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Love knows no separation not in measured distance nor in death...

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Paghunda Zahid

Date: 9/24/2021 5:38:00 AM

Wow... Well penned

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 11/3/2017 2:09:00 PM

Charlie when no one comments on a poem,what does that mean? My cinquain has comments but there are no comments that I can see.I do not understand why it is like this. Thank you

Line Gauthier

Date: 10/25/2017 6:47:00 PM

Wonderful. The last word packs a punch... as obviously intended. Bravo.

Charlie Smith
Date: 10/25/2017 8:31:00 PM

Thank you Line

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 9/18/2017 11:35:00 AM

Very true

Charlie Smith
Date: 9/18/2017 1:45:00 PM

Thanks Kim.

Francis J Grasso

Date: 8/25/2017 10:36:00 PM

Oh, Charlie these words are beautiful, and they mean everything. ...Fran

Charlie Smith
Date: 8/25/2017 10:40:00 PM

Thank you Francis...

Robert Lindley

Date: 8/24/2017 9:57:00 PM

SO BRILLIANTLY DEEP AND TRUE IN SUCH FEW WORDS! I agree with Susan, this is a timeless treasure! A fav my friend...

Charlie Smith
Date: 8/25/2017 11:06:00 AM

Thank you Robert...

Susan Ashley

Date: 8/23/2017 8:34:00 PM

Oh breathtakingly beautiful! Your monoku is a timeless treasure. Truly enjoyed your poem :)

Charlie Smith
Date: 8/23/2017 10:22:00 PM

Thank you for your kind words Susan....

John Hamilton

Date: 8/23/2017 8:17:00 PM

So true, well said Charlie, so much said in so few words, I admire that a lot, I tend to repeat myself sometimes.

Charlie Smith
Date: 8/23/2017 10:20:00 PM

Thank you John...

Arturo Michael

Date: 8/21/2017 8:29:00 PM

You said it in three lines...nothing can be added or subtracted...Clear as daylight...Thanks for sharing...Have a good night

Charlie Smith
Date: 8/21/2017 9:28:00 PM

Thank you Arturo, I appreciate your encouragement...

John Fleming

Date: 8/21/2017 10:32:00 AM

This is a fantastic bit of poetry--truly brilliant!! My best regards, Charlie. :) john

Charlie Smith
Date: 8/21/2017 10:59:00 AM

Thank you John...

Anil Deo

Date: 8/16/2017 8:14:00 PM

True in excellence; shalom/JUSTICE

Charlie Smith
Date: 8/16/2017 9:31:00 PM

Thank you Anil, peace be with you...

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 8/7/2017 4:38:00 PM

How true that is! Nice one! Saving, Charlie!

Charlie Smith
Date: 8/16/2017 9:31:00 PM

Thank you Kim...

Eileen Manassian

Date: 8/6/2017 4:54:00 PM

Amen to that...Beautifully structured monoku, Charlie. Loved this.

Charlie Smith
Date: 8/6/2017 6:58:00 PM

Thank you Eileen.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 8/6/2017 8:30:00 AM

- Excellent, Charlie - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Charlie Smith
Date: 8/6/2017 9:13:00 AM

Thank you Anne-Lise.

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 8/5/2017 8:59:00 PM

Hello Charlie, my friend.This is a beautiful Monoku. I will try to do one soon. Can it be on any theme? Just wondering. have a nice evening my friend.

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 8/6/2017 5:39:00 PM

Cahrlie I am not sure if I did a Monoku or not. Please read my monoku{ I think I got it but I am not sure. Thank you. my friend.

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 8/6/2017 3:42:00 PM

I will work on a Monoku at least I am going to try.

Charlie Smith
Date: 8/5/2017 10:35:00 PM

Darlene thanks. A Monoku is a one line Haiku and by that definition it should deal with the natural state. But it's generally accepted when dealing with other subjects, at least here at the soup. That's the way I view it, others might disagree...

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/5/2017 7:55:00 PM

that is ONE great little poem!!!

Charlie Smith
Date: 8/5/2017 10:36:00 PM

Thank you My Dear...

Carol B.

Date: 8/4/2017 5:09:00 PM

So much said with so few words. Loved it :)

Charlie Smith
Date: 8/4/2017 7:59:00 PM

Thank you Carol...

Freddie Robinson Jr.

Date: 8/4/2017 12:57:00 PM

Very poignant poem, Charlie. The truth inked by your words concerning love is timeless. Pure poetry. Loved reading this while listening to "Hanging On" by Active Child. Very peaceful. Love and joy always, my friend.

Charlie Smith
Date: 8/4/2017 7:59:00 PM

Thank you Freddie, peace be with you...

Winged Warrior

Date: 8/3/2017 8:59:00 AM

Great monoku my friend...love has no boundaries...^WW^

Charlie Smith
Date: 8/3/2017 10:32:00 AM

Thanks WW...

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 8/3/2017 7:30:00 AM

Brilliant my friend, Charlie! Who would disagree?

Charlie Smith
Date: 8/3/2017 10:32:00 AM

Thank you Demetrios...

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 8/2/2017 8:26:00 PM

A poem to memorize! True and exquisitely written! : )

Charlie Smith
Date: 8/2/2017 11:19:00 PM

You are too kind Connie...

Jan Allison

Date: 8/2/2017 7:27:00 PM

such truth in your words Charlie - am adding this to my faves ... we found out yesterday that a very dear friend had passed away - that will be 3 funerals in 3 weeks for me:-( hugs jan xx

Charlie Smith
Date: 8/2/2017 11:22:00 PM

Not the way to spend your summer Jan, so sorry for your sadness...