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Time Turns

Heading away time turns the corner as visions rewind frame by frame ticking feeling out the feelings once felt before emptiness echoes filling out a blackened soul light flickers and tragedy triggers past supposition stuck and awkward positioned I listen as nothingness roars running out of time the blindness soars

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 8/18/2018 5:12:00 AM
Hi Tim, I'm coming back from nothingness to thank you for this beautiful poem :)
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Date: 8/18/2018 5:11:00 AM
nice, great read!
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Date: 8/18/2018 2:30:00 AM
Darn netflix!!! great write!!
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Date: 8/17/2018 6:34:00 PM
Absolutely beautiful, Tim. Touching - I felt the feel in your poem. All the best ... CayCay
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Date: 8/17/2018 2:32:00 PM
Well written Tim. Powerful :)
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Date: 8/17/2018 2:06:00 PM
Nothingness,Emptiness,Blindness...Oh this gives me a sad feeling...Time turns...and mewpages are written,hopefully of light,sunshine and happiness.Deep poem to delve in.
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Date: 8/17/2018 1:44:00 PM
This was really deep my friend. I can feel this.
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Date: 8/17/2018 1:38:00 PM
great emotion in your lines Tim, I especially love the final stanza:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 8/17/2018 12:56:00 PM
So it does Tim, I like it...
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