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Time Stopped For Fear

Time stopped for Fear she held her breath and then stepped aside politely and tiptoed 'round the bend And 'though she kept on going she slowed down to a crawl until it seemed she hadn't kept going on at all Thus Fear felt respected- so powerful and large that he practically decided that he would be in charge Reason was evicted and Logic left in tears in the chaos that ensued from his cruel taunts and jeers He bullied all about him 'til he went too far and caused the very things they dreaded when Time herself had paused Then recklessly they ran ahead- Time quickly joined the race for Fear was left defeated when they met him face to face!

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Date: 4/17/2021 3:34:00 PM
Cool poem; -JT
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Date: 10/29/2020 5:46:00 PM
Nicely penned; fear is a formidable beast indeed.bud
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Rhona Mcferran
Date: 10/30/2020 9:28:00 PM
Yes, I think fear is my worst and most dangerous enemy! Thanks for the comment, my friend! ;)
Date: 4/2/2020 12:31:00 PM
Hi Rhona, rhyme is difficult to craft in seamless harmony & purpose...you accomplish both with this artfully presented work!
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Rhona Mcferran
Date: 5/1/2020 12:10:00 PM
Thank you for the wonderful compliment! ;)
Date: 2/21/2020 9:54:00 PM
Great message and great write. Especially in these times. This is "timeless."
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Rhona Mcferran
Date: 2/21/2020 10:28:00 PM
Thank you so much!
Date: 2/1/2020 5:02:00 PM
This swept me up in tangled spikes of fear and love, so breath taking, wonderful writing, my friend!
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Rhona Mcferran
Date: 2/3/2020 12:35:00 AM
Aaaww, thank you so much!! ;)

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