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time stands still

hello everyone I will respond to all soon thank you peace and blessings "time stands still" watching the warm fire mesmerized by illumination flames of reds yellows whites within this picturesqueness time stands still not wanting to leave dancing embers captivate snuggled with love and romanticisms a hallmark stage breathes quiet thoughts are clear embracing such ornaments that touch eyes and souls harbored forevermore still time stands still SkyWatcher 12-05-23

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Date: 12/9/2023 7:25:00 AM
In the quiet moments while time stands still, the timelessness is filled with the Love of God. Embrace them and acknowledge Him, for He loves you. A lonely poem, Lisa. Thanks for the peace it brings to us the readers. Have a blessed Christmas season, Hugs, Bill
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Lisa Ricci
Date: 12/10/2023 3:44:00 AM
Bill Bill Bill. Good Morning. It is I who thanks you. Truly. I do not take you or your visits and generosity for granted. Thank you ever so much. Have a wonderful morning and day. I will see you on your page. Peace and Blessings always. (smile)
Date: 12/5/2023 6:39:00 AM
I love the way you describe things and make your poems flow in such a creative manner, I especially love the lines “ mesmerized by illumination flames of reds yellows whites within this picturesqueness“ i can see through your words and feel the heat as i read! How clever and beautiful it is. And i love how you’ve described time too: a poem on time never is bad but this dear lisa is so evocatively impeccable. I felt so much reading your word weaving. What touches our heart,soul forever inscribed
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Lisa Ricci
Date: 12/7/2023 3:51:00 AM
Good Morning Empress. Hi. A million thank yous for your generosity. Never do I take you your visits reviews or commentary for granted. Truly. I am honored and I thank you. This was a beautiful way to start the day. Have a beautiful morning. Peace and Blessings always. (smile)
Date: 12/5/2023 6:39:00 AM
My wife loves a warm fireplace, quite romantic as you nicely describe. I guess we all do. Ditto a nice campfire
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Lisa Ricci
Date: 12/7/2023 3:41:00 AM
Hello Tom. Good Morning. Thank you very much. Yes, a fireplace is something... I just came from your "Mary Rogers" entry which is extraordinary. Be very proud of your work. I'm certain Poe would be... Have a wonderful morning and day. Blessings and Peace (smile)
Date: 12/5/2023 6:23:00 AM
Before I got married I'd sit reading by the open coal fire and often I'd stop reading to just stare into the flames, so relaxing. Tom
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Date: 12/7/2023 3:23:00 AM
Yes it is. Very. Hi Tom. Good Morning. Thank you for seeing this entry and for enhancing it with your shared commentary. The flames and all of it is very mesmerizing and relaxing I agree. Have a wonderful morning and day. Take care of yourself. Peace and Blessings always. (smile)