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Time for a Potty, err party

Time for a birthday potty... err Party For the one who writes a wee bit naughty The birthday girl is Jan She's sitting on the can I think she might be farty... err forty!

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Tania Kitchin

Date: 1/27/2024 7:15:00 AM

Lin, ha ha, a great birthday limerick for Jan.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 1/25/2024 11:23:00 AM

- AWESOME FUN !!! - hugs

Lin Lane
Date: 1/25/2024 12:17:00 PM

Thanks a bunch, and hugs to you!

Deb M

Date: 1/25/2024 11:09:00 AM

Love it and perfect for the Queen of Pooparama!! Very clever and funny lovely Lin! You are a good friend to Jan! Debx

Lin Lane
Date: 1/25/2024 12:17:00 PM

Thank you very much, my sweet friend. We're all good friends, and that includes you.

Jan Allison

Date: 1/25/2024 9:18:00 AM

ha ha ha this is hilariarse! Thanks so much Lin lol_) hugs Jan xx

Lin Lane
Date: 1/25/2024 9:39:00 AM

You're so very welcome!

David Kavanagh

Date: 1/25/2024 8:31:00 AM

Very clever Lin, exactly the type of toilet humour she loves, be a great poem for her birthday card, happy 40th birthday Jan even if you’re indisposed on the can! Cheers David

Lin Lane
Date: 1/25/2024 9:39:00 AM

Chick, you can be whatever age you declare yourself to be ;-) Hugs back to you!

Jan Allison
Date: 1/25/2024 9:19:00 AM

err excuse me Lin I am 21 again again again plus vat lol:-) hugs Jan xx

Lin Lane
Date: 1/25/2024 8:40:00 AM

Thanks, David. Jan might be a shade over forty, but I mustn't say how shady or she'll reciprocate by writing a limerick about me.

Daniel Henry Rodgers

Date: 1/25/2024 6:49:00 AM

Hello Lin, I laughed and loved your limerick and such comedy! - Blessings, Daniel

Jan Allison
Date: 1/25/2024 9:19:00 AM

Thanks Lin and than you for your comment Daniel:-) hugs jan xx

Lin Lane
Date: 1/25/2024 6:53:00 AM

Thank you, Daniel. I'm not sure you're aware of Jan's reputation for writing bathroom type humorous limericks, but this is the best gift I could come up with for her. I'm delighted you found it laughable.

John Lawless

Date: 1/25/2024 6:19:00 AM

...but if you were forty and i was forty then you'd be forty two

Jan Allison
Date: 1/25/2024 9:20:00 AM

ha ha ha fun comment John:-) hugs jan xx

Lin Lane
Date: 1/25/2024 6:28:00 AM

oh heck, let's split the difference. Now, we're each forty one. Stop being rational to my irrational thoughts. lol.

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 1/25/2024 4:52:00 AM

clever, witty, and humorous. Brought a smile to my face this morning, hugs, Sara

Jan Allison
Date: 1/25/2024 9:20:00 AM

sure made me smile too Sara!:-) hugs jan xx

Lin Lane
Date: 1/25/2024 5:09:00 AM

G'morning, Sara. Smiles are always good. Thanks for enjoying this one.

Tom Cunningham

Date: 1/25/2024 4:32:00 AM

Lol, she will be after all the different cakes she'll be eating. Tom

Jan Allison
Date: 1/25/2024 9:23:00 AM

I had raspberry cherry bakewell after lunch and then discovered our lovely friend had purchased another slab for me and given it to my hubby in secret lol. going to save it for tomorrow so i can continue the birthday a little longer, its been fun! and thanks so much for the poem Lin! hugs janxx

Lin Lane
Date: 1/25/2024 5:08:00 AM

HA No doubt, Tom. Glad I'm not her next door neighbor today.