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Spirits of love speak from the grave. Visiting me In small voices, they whisper to my eternal soul as the ticking clock within counts out each predetermined beat of my heart, each finite moment in an infinite universe. One second in the face of time slips by, carrying all the love of my yesteryears into present hours like a heavenly embrace of warm, loving enlightenment. Our days are fleeting but love remains. Now, it is a quarter past ten, and someone takes their final breath as a newborn babe cries its first. With every breath, we share our love, passing through the light and shadows. Life becomes an endless circle. If we listen, we will hear love and wisdom whispered through the ages. Written – 7/6/20 Contest – Time, 8 Word Challenge Sponsor – Dear Heart * Poem was not entered (Contest was full)

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Date: 7/13/2021 1:10:00 PM
WOW!!! What a wonderful story/write. "Love It" Have a blessed day writing away..............
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Date: 7/9/2020 5:07:00 AM
First place in my contest Rhonda...and you don't even have to enter lol...your verses have taken flight, my friend since you've come back...^WW^ :o)
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Rhonda Johnson-Saunders
Date: 7/12/2020 5:33:00 PM
Thank you so much, WW. Your support means the world! Much love and blessings, Rhonda xx
Date: 7/7/2020 1:40:00 AM
This is so soothing Rhonda. Your magical muse would have surely soared in the contest. This is a fave for me. Can't really keep up with the frequency of contests these days as they get filled up soon. I just missed SO's The One That Got Away contest :) But your muse will always be your legacy! Blessings and love :)
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Rhonda Johnson-Saunders
Date: 7/12/2020 5:32:00 PM
Thank you so much, Aditi! I cannot keep up with all the contests, myself...just writing when I can steal a little time each day. I appreciate your support. Blessings, Rhonda xx
Date: 7/6/2020 1:50:00 PM
Naught to worry as you did a great job of it and that will always serve you well! Aloha! Rico
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Rhonda Johnson-Saunders
Date: 7/6/2020 8:26:00 PM
No worries...I knew I was taking a chance writing at the last minute. Thanks, Rico. :) xx
Date: 7/6/2020 1:07:00 PM
Beautifully written, I think Constance is going to love this! My best to you! xomo
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Rhonda Johnson-Saunders
Date: 7/6/2020 8:25:00 PM
Thanks, Maureen. I knew I was taking a chance. When I started writing, only two spots were left. :) Rhonda xx
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Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 7/6/2020 1:08:00 PM
D'oh! I just read that you missed the contest. Shame, Zi think this would have placed high.
Date: 7/6/2020 1:07:00 PM
You are abolutely right...through the ages...I like your vision in ink...
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Rhonda Johnson-Saunders
Date: 7/6/2020 8:23:00 PM
Thanks, Arturo...very kind of you :) Rhonda xx
Date: 7/6/2020 11:16:00 AM
Excellent poem, Rhonda, every word very well chosen,.
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Rhonda Johnson-Saunders
Date: 7/6/2020 8:22:00 PM
Thanks, Lawrence. Good to have a visit from you :) Rhonda xx
Date: 7/6/2020 10:30:00 AM
Well written Rhonda, you used the eight words well, a shame you missed the deadline, keep an eye on the contests though, I've seen the contests reappear because someone had dropped out. Hope you're well Tom
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Rhonda Johnson-Saunders
Date: 7/6/2020 8:22:00 PM
Thanks, Tom. I'll keep an eye on it. When I started writing the poem, two entries remained and an hour later it was full. I knew I was taking a chance :) Rhonda xx

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