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'Til Her Last Breath

'Til Her Last Breath My grandmother always told me That "words don't have to be beautiful To be powerful". But to me , hers were both. As a young frightened boy of eight I would listen from the hallways, The bedroom door unlocked, ajar , And what a happy space that was As my less than polite grandmother Spoke in a voice never heard before. She would laugh like an excited schoolgirl, Whispering what tomorrow may bring. She would reminisce of better times, And regale in their lives treasured past. No child could have wished for more. For within my new, walled-in heaven, Behind this facade,, I was loved, adored . I would hear the sound of a gentle kiss, Her saying "Goodnight my love, I love you more". And every night asleep she would do the same. As she called out my grandfather's name Ten years now since the love of her life died But still, from her sleep she calls out his name and Whispers " I love you, James", 'til her last breath . The door to my heaven, now firmly closed to me, But the memory of her lives on in my dreams, As I whisper in prayers "I love you Grandma". Our lives, forever connected by loves single thread. And for eternity I will love you Grandma 'til my last breath. For Julia ( Grandma ) Always in my heart and thoughts x

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Date: 3/11/2024 10:00:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. What a powerful/lovely Mother's Day write about your grandmother. I never had a grandmother. One was gone before I was born. The other one was gone when I was young. Have a blessed day writing away.............
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Date: 3/10/2024 8:52:00 AM
A tender and beautiful poem, I can see you close bond to you devoted grandma, which you have expressed with so much heartfelt emotions.. It is Mother's Day here in the UK, so I thought it would be nice to feature mum related poems... congratulations on your placement..
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Daniel Caplin
Date: 3/10/2024 10:48:00 AM
Good evening silent one , and thank you for recognising the poem as one of heartfelt love and devotion for a woman who encouraged and made me a better human being . Many thanks for giving me the opportunity to express my words within your poetry contest . Daniel
Date: 2/27/2024 4:10:00 PM
awww...now I'm crying...your poem moved me--such touching memories and tribute to your grandmother. She sounds like a true gem of a woman. I have similar feelings for my own sweet grandmother, one who endured so much...and she's in my heart and thoughts every day. Well done, Daniel! Have a pleasant evening, Sara
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Daniel Caplin
Date: 2/28/2024 2:14:00 AM
Hi Sara ,you have such a vast collection of work can you choose 3 of your most favourite for me to read , whenever you have the time . Hoping you won't mind me asking ? Daniel
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Daniel Caplin
Date: 2/28/2024 12:18:00 AM
Ah , thank you, kind Sara , my grandmother was a wonderful woman, a woman of substance , pragmatic , no heirs or graces , but at night when sleeping , it comforted me to know their was a little girl hiding within the woman , her own place of comfort , her dreams. Your kind words mean so much to me . Thank you.

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