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Thoughts of the Lost

Sleepless nights alone Piercing the thoughts of the lost Painful incision Death doesn’t mock the weary He scythes them heartlessly Russell Sivey Purely Fiction

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 11/2/2017 3:54:00 PM
Whoa!! Very scary in a way..I enjoyed reading your work..Death comes knocking whether we have made preparation or not..Thanks for all the visits to my page..Sara
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Date: 11/1/2017 5:53:00 PM
Great metaphorical tanka, Russell.
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Date: 11/1/2017 8:02:00 AM
A very deep and excellent tanka Russell..
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Date: 11/1/2017 6:38:00 AM
Moments of pain well captured--that last line tugs emotions!
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