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Thought of You

I started drifting away from myself saw myself changing, heard my own heartbeat. HOW long does it take to reach you ? My mind kept tossing over the deep blue sky. I feel intoxicated by your words. passion is running deep into my blood. once again I learned to smile. once again I learned to live. when you said,little bird fly

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John-Ovan.P. Hull

Date: 3/12/2016 9:57:00 AM

You sound like a very passionate person and you convey that beautifully through your words.

Laura Breidenthal

Date: 9/9/2013 3:47:00 AM

Your words are all aflutter! Beautiful words I must say! Always, Laura

Dan Kearley

Date: 8/29/2013 12:51:00 AM

You learned to smile...You learned to live. Just beautiful! :o)

Alozor Michael Ikechukwu

Date: 8/16/2013 10:16:00 AM

Expressive and on point.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 8/16/2013 2:08:00 AM

good morning Red, glad you found yourself. a nice way to spread your wings and fly... luv...linda

The Situation

Date: 8/15/2013 11:56:00 PM

A master rapper he must be.

Christine Phillips

Date: 8/15/2013 10:44:00 PM

A very nice calm and soothing poem. Nice work

Jack Ellison

Date: 8/15/2013 7:53:00 AM

Love it! Love it! Love it! So sweet, dear lady... more please! Warm hugs xoxox

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 8/14/2013 8:15:00 PM

Well it seems you have rediscovered your voice. This is beautifuly written. Ride the wave of inspiration you never know where it will take you. Good job Red it is good that your passion for writing has returned to you.

Red Fiery
Date: 8/14/2013 8:16:00 PM

Speechless

Donna Jones

Date: 8/14/2013 6:46:00 PM

Very beautiful Red...

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 8/14/2013 12:27:00 PM

- Thank you ... this is sweet and beautiful, Red. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Poet Tacito

Date: 8/14/2013 10:00:00 AM

This is my 1st time reading your work and I'm pretty impressed. I can deeply relate to these lines. Gorgeous & well said. One can only wonder if their thoughts are the same. Great job!