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This Years Rude Tenth Month

October bade to tune me for its heartache song. Thirty-one days pelleted stressed pummeled rain. How rude the tenth one to taunt with feuds weeks long. No frisky wind wishes gentled October’s strain. Thirty-one days pelleted stressed pummeled rain. October offered no hued tones to subdue wrong. No frisky wind wishes gentled October’s strain. Fall’s leading month numb-stunned my confronted strong. October offered no hued tones to subdue wrong. How rude the tenth one to taunt with feuds weeks long. Fall’s leading month numb-stunned my confronted strong. October bade to tune me for its heartache song. ... CayCay November 2, 2019

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Date: 11/7/2019 8:07:00 PM
Caycay, I am so happy to see you on this winners' list. Pantoums are not easy and you put your heart into this one with your creative words. I miss you and I Hope THIS month has started on a better note than october's for you. Hugs. Congrats too
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Date: 11/7/2019 8:03:00 PM
Congratulations on your win in Poet's October Pantoum, CayCay, great imagery. Hugs Eve
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Date: 11/7/2019 12:09:00 PM
Enjoyed the take and well-developed words in your pantoum worthy for first its high placement, thank you for entering my contest ~ Aloha always William
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Date: 11/3/2019 3:10:00 PM
thankfully rude October has morphed into November - not sure what that's going to offer but as my mum, son and hubby have November birthdays its got to he a happier month:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 11/3/2019 6:34:00 AM
Simply, STUNNING dearest, CayCay! Loved it!
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Date: 11/3/2019 2:19:00 AM
A awesome entry and I wish you all the best for it. I love October ~ Bless you, Gina
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