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This Scar of Mine

There is a scar On my face Small, steadfastly placed One only notices if they are this close To kissing my soul On my cheek Below the eyes and sideways Beside the bubble-gum sweet Mouth, vivacious story teller like an upside down sharp angled half moon The endless emotions of my sky So attractively rough It attacks the delicate features of my face Allowing my streetwise beautiful Personality To shine through, I don’t hide thetruth It’s as plain as the scar on my face Life isn’t ugly, you make it that way Some days I wish it wasn’t there But I always Appreciate it’s presence I won’t ever forget When I received The blow to my vanity From a fight over youthful yearnings Inside this Is my learning processes Scars hold history I shall carry with me Through tough times Soft and easy, peaceful To remind me Of me

Copyright © | Year Posted 2007




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Date: 2/23/2019 6:05:00 PM
Hello Belle Cardenas,people have all kinds of scares.Fighting, operations etc. I have operations scars, it does not bother me. Iy is apart of me and always will be. Other people have scars from pain that did not heal.Have a nice evening my friend.
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Date: 11/16/2012 2:08:00 PM
A very profound write, from a strong woman! Light & Love
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Date: 5/30/2009 7:32:00 AM
Dear Bella, So nice to see the concrete MASTERPIECE, featured again. Hope all is well with you. Lainie
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Date: 5/26/2009 3:24:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week. Love, Carol
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Date: 5/25/2009 5:24:00 PM
Bella, congrats with your feature...Raul
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Date: 5/25/2009 5:16:00 PM
So brilliant. Warm congrats once again on an amazing feature! Love, Shar
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Date: 5/25/2009 1:23:00 PM
Must be a best of the best wqeek. Congrats young lady. Now find your way back here. God Bless. Vince
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Date: 5/25/2009 9:01:00 AM
Please take enough time off to get well, I do appreciate the fact that you have to forgo the pains you feel to judge the great entries. I wish you quick recovery and sound health. Keep us posted on any development… congrats to all winners.
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Date: 5/25/2009 12:41:00 AM
Congratulations on your featured poem. Enjoy the honor and success. More power. Ernilando
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Date: 5/24/2009 5:25:00 PM
Just wanted to drop by and add congratulations on having your poem featured to my other comment. This is such a creative poem and deserving of another honor. Wishing you continued success with your writing. Karen
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Date: 4/8/2009 9:57:00 AM
A great write. Scars do hold memories, of times good and bad...I wish now that I didnt have many of the scars that I do....and im glad that they seem to fade most days....again great write, keep it up ^^ <33 Jese
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