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This Romeo Is Bleeding

This Romeo is bleeding but you don't see his blood." - Bon Jovi's Always This romeo is bleeding but you don't see his blood but were it visible it would be so in a flood. The times spent wrapped in life with you made me feel a stud then came fate's blow rendering my heart dead with a thud. My senses still all function though none remain engaged. Blood may not be displayed but mine hot spills enraged. For me, my best dream had bloomed from a real time bud only to then be drowned in a nightmare's heartbreak mud. ... CayCay February 20, 2020 Written for a contest

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Date: 3/1/2020 8:48:00 AM
Congratulations on your podium win CayCay. I hope you are doing well? xxoo
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Date: 2/23/2020 7:51:00 AM
- Congratulations on your winning poem, CayCay :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 2/23/2020 6:39:00 AM
always hurts the ego when these things happen... nice take on the line.. Congratulations on your placement in the contest..
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Date: 2/21/2020 9:13:00 PM
I love what you did with that song line, dear friend. You were inspired, and I am glad to see you posting more poetry. I hope your weekend is going great!!
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Date: 2/21/2020 12:09:00 PM
- Great written, CayCay ... I especially like the last two lines - Best wishes in the contest - Have a wonderful weekend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 2/21/2020 6:49:00 AM
Very emotive write CayCay--every verse has the saddened sound of heartbreak, just as intended. Apt for the contest theme. All the best.
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