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This Poem Is How I Feel

Sometimes on the road of life Change becomes the norm When you think, “The sky is true” The horizon brews a storm Some storms last but a minute Like a ship they sail right by Other storms seem to be As endless as the sky Some storms come with a flood As life gets washed away Other storms shake the ground As mountains crumble into clay Storms come in many sizes They come in many shapes Storms come in many forms Some bless while others rape As we face the storms of life They change who we are Sometimes, we’re the clouds Other times we’re the stars Storms have one thing in common One day they too shall pass As a car rolls to a stop Storms run out of gas After the storm has passed us by A seed sprouts to a flower Each petal seems to be Exuding strength and power I have weathered many storms Their lines map my face In their wake I have found Love is my saving grace I don’t know what this poem means I don’t know if I ever will All I know is that right now This poem is how I feel

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 3/30/2019 1:13:00 AM
Man, you are a truley talented poet. Your the Micheal Jordan of poetry soup in my eyes. I'd apreciate it alot if you read one of my poems and tell me your honest opinion, or gave me some constructive critisism
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Date: 12/7/2012 1:22:00 PM
Hello Micael hey it's almost 2013 and you have had NO comments since 8/2011..where are YOU? How are you? Did you finish college? How the little girl & your sweet wife? Please check in with your friends here we miss you. Light & Love
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Date: 8/2/2011 4:07:00 AM
Superb writing dear Michael. Congratulations on your 3 entries making it through the first round and best wishes on making it to the Finals. yf4l, Lainie
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Date: 7/11/2011 7:37:00 PM
Congrats on this one being featured at last. God Bless. Vince
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Date: 7/11/2011 5:50:00 PM
Congratulations! on your featured poem it was beautifully written... I read the right poem at the right time cause that is exactly how i feel too...
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Date: 7/10/2011 6:37:00 PM
Congrats Michael on your featured poem this week on PS..wonderful words to share with us all my friend with luv..
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Date: 7/10/2011 1:15:00 PM
Congratulations on your poem being featured this week Michael. Love, Carol YF4L
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Date: 7/10/2011 10:29:00 AM
Oooo, goosebumps! This is beautiful, speaks directly to my soul. Well written, awesome message and a joy to read. Regards
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Date: 3/11/2011 11:23:00 AM
Beautiful rendition of your feelings...very clever and excellent technique.
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Date: 3/10/2011 2:58:00 PM
a great piece of poetry michael, nice to read one of your poems again. how have you been? Hope everything is going ok.
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Date: 3/5/2011 11:23:00 AM
I love the camparison of life's trials and tribulations to strorms. It reminds us that like storms, some life experiences may be scary and/or destructive and some last longer than others but eventually you will overcome the hardships.
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Date: 1/5/2011 4:21:00 PM
Michael, this is magnificent. I would say one of the best of yours I have read. That is why I have to fav it! (by the way, petals for pedals) LUv, Andrea
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Date: 1/5/2011 8:56:00 AM
Hello Michael, You are one of the few people who understands my poem Poetry and Mysticism and I thank you for that comment. I like your poem posted here; heck, I feel the same way most of the time. Sometimes, even I, have no idea what many of my poems mean. Take care and be kind to your Muse. Jancarl
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Date: 1/4/2011 8:14:00 PM
I Know how you feel the same way I feel.. // I'm sorry .. your friend for ever in poetry.. JackReed3poetrys....
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Date: 1/4/2011 7:21:00 PM
True feeling with emotions only one can understand.. I love the grace in your words.. Full of light I must say,..p.d.
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Date: 1/4/2011 6:38:00 PM
Wow! The emotion comes through your words in a powerful way. I like the artist presentation. It was so good to see your name in my inbox. I haven't been spending much time here at The Soup but it is fun to catch up with friends from time to time. I hope life has been treating you kindly. May God bless you with a wonderful 2011! Karen
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Date: 1/4/2011 5:34:00 PM
MIchael, what a happy surprise to see a poem from you..I miss you and think of you often..hope that all is ok with you..your poem makes me wonder.? Please let us know how things are going with you , your family, and school.BG
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Date: 1/4/2011 5:17:00 PM
You were the first person that I looked for when I finally got back into poetry soup, and I was not disappointed. Another great poem......hearing from you again made my day. I know you have been busy with your studies, been there done that. Would love to catch up with you for a chat again soon. Love to you and yours. Hugsss.
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Date: 1/4/2011 5:04:00 PM
Hi MJ, the storms you weathered gave you a greater appreciation for the love you finally found. Have a blessed new year, old friend, and stop by to visit us more often. We miss you. Love and blessings, Carolyn
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Date: 1/4/2011 4:32:00 PM
Smile ~ "Your Blessed Treasures" shall stick around and paint the walls here at The Soup with "Your Love" ~ This Is a wonderfully Soulful poe and "Yes," storms do come and then they go but, "The 'Foundation of Christ,' Shall Remain 'Forevermore!!!'" ~ "A Fave" ~ "My Love & Warmth to 'You, Your Wife &, All You Love, 'Always,'" John! ~ Smile, "Have A Very 'Blessed & Beautiful' Day 'Dear Michael;'" Bye!:) ~
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Date: 1/4/2011 4:25:00 PM
Smile ~ Well, whatever it Is that "Your Brightness" feels "My 'Dear, Precious & Priceless Friend, Michael Jordan!!!'" ~ "Your 'Blessed Soul' Glows Very Sweetly" once more amid this "Magnificent" paintings lovely array of "Splendours Colours; 'Beautiul Reflections Dipped In Light!!!'" ~ You know, I think about "You" from time to time and very glad to have heard from "Your Giftedness" today my friend and, I Am truly hoping that ~ ....Cont:)
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Date: 1/4/2011 4:21:00 PM
I can feel this one, Michael. So nice to hear from you again. I'm asking a big favor. Pray for my family. My son is fighting a battle with anger and bitterness. His son, my grandson is looking at a possible 25 to life. But somehow thru all the tragedies this year I still feel blessed. Vince
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