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This Old House

Inside Old House by cujo-chan As this old house crumbles slowly to dust, I humbly polish the prominent rust, and more aware of my mortality, I search for the tallest stalks to guide me to the wilting garden beyond the door overgrown with ferns, red roses no more. My hopes are crushed with a once wreathed rosette beneath my feet where memories are swept. Yet, love returns through an open window. On a wistful breeze, dreams will gently flow, and as I rebuild this decrepit home, I will sweeten the roof with honeycomb. Then, I will hear your footsteps on the porch, our whispers will dance like flames of a torch. The staircase, once grand, will again rise high beyond the attic into bluest sky where concave hearts fill with abundant love and loneliness dims in starlight above. My days ahead in this lodge once decayed will be free to love in the home I made. From bone to ashes, destined are the dead, but souls grant me peace from clouds overhead. Written 7/14/20 Contest - Decaying House Sponsor - Constance La France

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Date: 7/27/2020 4:43:00 AM
This is such a heartwarming muse Rhonda. I love who you ended on a hopeful soulful note from a sad turn. Congratulations on your win! :) Much love
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Date: 7/25/2020 9:28:00 AM
Rhonda, congratulations on your win in my decaying house contest with this excellent write, a FAV for me and I love your image too _Constance
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Date: 7/22/2020 5:08:00 PM
Oh Rhonda, this is my favorite! You have ended it so romantically and uplifting. I love it and will Fave it! Congratulations on your most deserving First Place win! Blessings xxoo
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Date: 7/22/2020 3:21:00 PM
Awe-inspiring rendering of this well-strung couplet, Rhonda, enjoyed your beautiful choice of words immensely, my compliments on your deserving win -- Aloha~@William
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Date: 7/19/2020 3:12:00 PM
you wove the words in seamlessly rhonda, your imagery is always a joy to read, many congratulations on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 7/17/2020 3:25:00 AM
Nicely done; well beyond what was expected or anticipated. "I will hear your footsteps on the porch, our whispers will dance like flames of a torch." Wow! Terrific job.
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Date: 7/15/2020 5:17:00 PM
you made this so much more than about a decaying house. You filled it with love and peace. Wonderful.
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Date: 7/15/2020 11:41:00 AM
Too often, people leave older homes just because they need some work. Just look at all the memories you have made here, Rhonda. An excellent entry for the contest. Winning wishes for you! Hugs, Carolyn
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Date: 7/15/2020 8:29:00 AM
This fantastic poem reminds me of an old American song of the fifties, I think. Masterfully written with excellent imagery dearest, Rhonda! Hugs xxx
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Date: 7/15/2020 4:15:00 AM
Very nice use of the ten words, Rhonda:) P.S. : you have used the word house twice..
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Date: 7/15/2020 3:53:00 AM
Very well written Rhonda, you used the eight words well. Tom
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Date: 7/14/2020 11:46:00 PM
I absolutely love this exquisitely beautiful poem, with its awesome imagery. This is such an impressive entry for the contest. Good luck.
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