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This Love----Rhyme Version

oh! That this rose would be a symbol of love the way it blooms- your beauty be told your perfumed scent in the fragrance of and lo the thorns pierce just as bold! February 20, 2020 not for contest!

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Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 2/24/2020 11:53:00 AM

Awesome Sandy - a wonderful poem by a talented poetess. Your pen does excel in anything you write, I agree 100% with Chris. Blessings, Jennifer.

Sandra Adams
Date: 2/24/2020 7:26:00 PM

wow… thank you for such kind words Jennifer... hugs

Chris Green

Date: 2/24/2020 8:19:00 AM

Wow, and now the rhyming version. Your pen excels in every area it explores my friend. This was beautiful Sandy

Sandra Adams
Date: 2/24/2020 11:20:00 AM

thank you so much Chris... hugs

Lindsay Laurie

Date: 2/23/2020 5:42:00 PM

Hello Sandra … like a sting in the tail, so be a mite wary. I enjoyed your verse Sandra - Lindsay

Sandra Adams
Date: 2/23/2020 7:55:00 PM

Thank you so very much Lindsay! :)

Running Wolves

Date: 2/23/2020 1:24:00 PM

wonderful poem

Sandra Adams
Date: 2/23/2020 7:54:00 PM

Thank you

Quoth Theraven

Date: 2/22/2020 11:14:00 PM

Sandra, I came to stir my senses, and you turned the mixer up to puree. -Richard

Sandra Adams
Date: 2/23/2020 7:54:00 PM

lol... thank you Richard...I think...

Sara Kendrick

Date: 2/22/2020 4:43:00 PM

Enjoyed reading your work. Very comparative in metaphor language. Thanks for dropping by my page. Sara

Sandra Adams
Date: 2/22/2020 8:31:00 PM

Thank you so much Sara... hugs

Arturo Michael

Date: 2/22/2020 11:49:00 AM

I like this...The pierce of thorns...is there to feel

Sandra Adams
Date: 2/22/2020 8:30:00 PM

Thank you so much Arturo :) hugs

Alexis Y.

Date: 2/22/2020 11:29:00 AM

Hi Sandra, You’ve a good descriptive write. Why not enter it in the contest? Have a wonderful weekend:-) Alexis

Sandra Adams
Date: 2/22/2020 8:30:00 PM

Thank you so much Alexis... :) hugs

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 2/22/2020 11:03:00 AM

- BEAUTIFUL :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Sandra Adams
Date: 2/22/2020 8:29:00 PM

Thank you Anne-Lise… hugs

Tom Cunningham

Date: 2/22/2020 10:11:00 AM

Well composed Sandra, both as good as each other. Tom

Sandra Adams
Date: 2/22/2020 8:29:00 PM

Thank you so much Tom... :) hugs

Vijay Pandit

Date: 2/22/2020 8:53:00 AM

I like this just as much as the one you wrote for the contest--but, I like the other one a bit more. Well done my friend.

Sandra Adams
Date: 2/22/2020 8:28:00 PM

Thank you so much Vijay...I altered the other one some again, trying to get it where I want it... hugs

Mark Koplin

Date: 2/22/2020 8:32:00 AM

So beautiful. Your words are magical.

Sandra Adams
Date: 2/22/2020 8:27:00 PM

Thank you so much Mark :) hugs