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This Hell

His thoughts go off like bombs inside his mind, so deafening, so poisonous, so doomed to thrash against a dam of memories that take him back to hopeful yesterdays. His thoughts will shout but never make a sound, his mind as sharp as when we was a boy. His body, once so strong, has flickered out like flames that reach the end of blackened wick. His head is full of words he longs to speak, but in this hell, he cannot move his lips. As constant tremors steal his weathered pen, his stranger-hands will never touch again. He yearns to feel her porcelain petal-skin, to count the fervent beats beneath her chest. But she can only kiss his hollow cheek where salty tears commingle in despair. She sits with him and holds his withered hand. She runs her shaking fingers through his hair. He needs to see her soft, angelic face until his lungs can't hold another breath. Dedicated to those with ALS and anyone who has had to watch a loved one suffer through this terrifying disease

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 10/18/2015 3:07:00 PM
oh, such a heartfelt write - sad but lovely
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Date: 10/8/2015 7:58:00 AM
Wow Heather. This is a 7 and a favorite. You have so vividly brought this picture of suffering and love to my heart and soul. I am touched deeply. The prison of ALS is far worse than prison and it is sad to think that vibrant souls are trapped in, "This Hell." Thank you so much for sharing, my friend.... Robert.
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Date: 9/30/2015 8:15:00 PM
Hell indeed. This was moving and insightful. Thank you for sharing it.
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Date: 9/28/2015 6:20:00 PM
This brings to mind the movie "The Theory of Everything". As always your writing moves me.
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Date: 9/26/2015 11:43:00 PM
Loved this, its only halfway down the poem I started to get where this was going, I can feel the pain in this and know what this is like, you have expressed this beautifully.
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Date: 9/22/2015 11:11:00 AM
to have compassion and empathy for those who are health challenged is a gift.. and this gift offers much grace and tenderness, heather... wow!.. huggs
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Date: 9/19/2015 10:22:00 PM
A hard-hitting, powerful piece! "She runs her shaking fingers through his hair." Such a touching, heartbreaking line... these lines are heartbreaking too: "His head is full of words he longs to speak, but in this hell, he cannot move his lips."... amazing work! Always, Laura
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Date: 9/19/2015 9:59:00 PM
Your heart-wrenching poem gives us a glimpse of the horrors of that illness. Janice
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Date: 9/19/2015 4:54:00 PM
All the symptoms you have described were present in an aunt who died of same disease. She used to be full of life. A well-written informative piece, the reader may well understand what the victim is going through.
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Date: 9/18/2015 1:11:00 PM
HI, Heather. Read your comment to me. Sorry about your friends with ALS.
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Date: 9/18/2015 5:49:00 AM
This is so beautifully composed Heather. My dearest friend has this terrible thief of the mind and I can no longer reach her. She is living in a world of yesterdays that come and go and it breaks my heart. Her older sister died from it a few years back. This moved me to tears. Blessings, Connie
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Heather Ober
Date: 9/18/2015 7:00:00 AM
Connie, I am so sorry to hear about your friend. It takes a tremendous amount of strength to watch someone you love go through something like this. Hang in there. Hugs!
Date: 9/17/2015 9:31:00 AM
Hey Heather, stopped by for a visit. This is a disturbing treatise on a debilitating and merciless disease that so many suffer with. You have an amazing ability to take us inside the mind of one who suffers with it. Sad yet deeply insightful. Excellent writing and expression. Be Blessed, Neva
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Date: 9/16/2015 10:28:00 PM
OH MY GOSH. this is so so sad, I don't know anyone personally with this. do you? I feel really bad for these folks and for those who suffer along with them!
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Heather Ober
Date: 9/17/2015 7:04:00 AM
I have known a few people with ALS - right now, one of my neighbours is suffering through what is probably his last year. It is heart-breaking to see.

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