This Day

this day breathes heavy like me i feel its breath wrapping me in this chill as i struggle to catch my own beneath its rise i fall shadowless beneath this sky that hides the sun i only dream of warm caresses as this day seems to last forever (Bus scribble)

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Running Wolves

Date: 2/24/2020 7:47:00 PM

you write so well for bus scribbles, you rock lil Lady

Sandra Adams
Date: 2/24/2020 8:08:00 PM

thank you...nature is often my inspiration... :) hugs

Hilo Poet

Date: 2/22/2020 9:52:00 PM

Terseness not so overly-bearing, simplistic in nature, thusly, echoes entertainingly at a righteous measure, Sandra, love it! -- Aloha!~@wk

Sandra Adams
Date: 2/23/2020 8:07:00 PM

Thank you so very much William... hugs

Jenish Somadas

Date: 2/22/2020 5:57:00 AM

Better you stay in the bus..You can fill the Soup with your beautiful muses...

Sandra Adams
Date: 2/22/2020 7:23:00 AM

Thank you so much Jenish...I used to do daily bus scribbles but now they come less frequent, winter is less inspiring... perhaps as the scenes change with the seasons they will become more frequent... time depending of course... hugs

Frederic Parker

Date: 2/21/2020 5:44:00 PM

the words that come to us in the strangest of places, glad you wrote them down

Sandra Adams
Date: 2/21/2020 9:41:00 PM

mine love to come when i am driving and can't write them down...i was lucky enough to be sitting on down time for 10 minutes … hugs

Tom Cunningham

Date: 2/21/2020 4:03:00 PM

I'm very impressed if that's a bus scribble. Hopefully the skies will clear for you Sandra. Enjoy your weekend. Tom

Sandra Adams
Date: 2/21/2020 9:40:00 PM

Thank you Tom, been battling a cold for well over 3 weeks, on my third full bottle of cough medicine, happens when you are exposed to germs all the time... i used to do some pretty detailed bus scribbles... this is the first in a long time but, i haven't had much down time, because so many co workers are calling out sick... have a great weekend Tom...hugs

Chris Green

Date: 2/21/2020 2:41:00 PM

It sure does seem to be dragging, that's for sure. But if a dragging Friday means a new bus scribble from you, then I say drag on Friday. :) This was wonderful Sandy.

Sandra Adams
Date: 2/21/2020 9:38:00 PM

lol...i actually had a crazy afternoon but was staring out the bus window in the 10 minutes i had to myself before the kids came out and the poem came to me...it's been quite some time since my last bus scribble... not my best but I've been sick with a cold for over 3 weeks and it was windy today...it made it easier to lose your breath and start coughing! :) hugs