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Life is just a living nightmare when depression start's sitting in We go to the doctor's for help he write's a prescription We go to pick it up but it an'it in yet It only make's matter's worse the anxiety emotion's start's sitting in We carefully analyzethe choices of this living like this in misery or is it better in death? We have disputed this life suck's In death their is no pain just rest we ask ourself's as we weigh the issue of suicide what would be the perfect death would be like? we already know everyone has to die but why? when were dead what everyone think's is irrelevant we know we have to leave someone we love behind just another day of conflict of good vs evil but which will win? only one answer the undertaker love ya see ya in hell

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 8/12/2012 2:01:00 PM
Beautiful day to be reading and enjoying poetry Bradley. Hope to be back reading more in a week or so. Love, Carol
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Bradley Cox
Date: 8/13/2012 12:36:00 AM
Well thank you for reading , I hope you enjoy your week,
Date: 8/11/2012 1:18:00 PM
Very mind provoking write... and very sad. I like to think I live as much because others need me there... as for myself. My time is not right until I've completed my mission to help those around me... especially my family. Even when my own needs have been great... there was still need else where. And in small ways I like to think I've made a difference.
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Date: 8/11/2012 9:39:00 AM
wow.. This caught me off guard! I have the honor of being first read:) geeze. heavy poem man. Everyone has to go, but I believe everyone is here for a reason.
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Bradley Cox
Date: 8/11/2012 10:41:00 AM
Thank you for reading and sharing with me

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