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Things Unsaid

Regret Bittersweet tears Gently fall unremarked An outpouring of emotion Unheard

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Date: 1/13/2015 3:57:00 PM

the last word used was really poignant on this cinquain!

Shane Cooper
Date: 1/13/2015 4:26:00 PM

Thanks I found the form really easy to use, it was based on Something that was said to me a couple of days ago. Love Shane xxx

Date: 1/13/2015 12:47:00 PM

This is such a remarkable piece that I enjoyed reading! Excellent! Pandita.

Shane Cooper
Date: 1/13/2015 12:51:00 PM

Thanks Pandita it is something that is very meaningful to me. Love Shane xxx

Date: 1/13/2015 7:31:00 AM

So few words can say so much:-) Great to be able to express our emotions through our poems Shane:-) Hugs Jan x

Shane Cooper
Date: 1/13/2015 8:17:00 AM

Yes it is. I was thinking about what you said the other day and some songs which follow the same track. Thanks for the inspiration love Shanexxx

Date: 1/12/2015 10:03:00 PM

Nice Cinquain, Shane. Well done!

Shane Cooper
Date: 1/13/2015 12:54:00 AM

Thanks Laura, It was my first attempt at this form. love Shane xxx