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Then God Proclaimed

I’ll design a woman, a woman of style, And fashion her for strength all the while. Dubious things, she will put aside, But stumble, she must not, over her pride. She will be a leader, motivated by love, And guided by pearls furnished from above. I’ll give her a kiss sweeter than wine And a soul with character that’s genuine. She shall be capable of doing all my will; And, my law of the spirit, she will fulfill. I’ll make her a lady, and she will pass muster, For lunch, she’ll bring her lover the Eshcol cluster.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2006




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Date: 10/18/2008 10:35:00 AM
Albert - Congratulations on your poem being featured this week on Poetry Soup! Peace always, John
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Date: 10/15/2008 6:58:00 PM
Congrats on your wonderful poem being featured this week - God Bless
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Date: 10/14/2008 7:13:00 PM
This was great poem indeed. Last line sure took a great attention of mine:) Congratulations !!Love, Chitra
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Date: 10/14/2008 7:08:00 PM
Well you had me all the way to the last line, Albert and then I went, "Whats that?" as in "Eshcol cluster" ... smile ...
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Date: 10/14/2008 7:21:00 AM
Very nice indeed. Love the flow and imagery.This poem takes the reader's imagination on a free flight of fantasy. Thanks for sharing this inspirational message. Meg.
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Date: 10/13/2008 6:51:00 PM
Congratulations on this wonderful poem being featured this week! Keep writing! ~ Carrie
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Date: 10/13/2008 5:09:00 PM
Interesting view. Congratulations on having your poem featured this week. I wish you continued success with your writing. Karen
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Date: 10/13/2008 7:08:00 AM
Really cool poem, Albert...nice flow of words and great imagery!
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Date: 10/13/2008 6:48:00 AM
Congratulations Albert, on the featuring of your poem "Then God Proclaimed." Vince
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Date: 10/13/2008 5:33:00 AM
Congrats Albert on your wonderful poetry being featured this week! Love, Shar
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