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The Young Girl

The young girl had come to live with them that summer. The young girl told the older step-sister that Her initials were the same as hers. She asks: Who's initials are you talking about? The young girl says you know. The girl that walks in the graveyard. I told your mom the first day I was here. Your dad looked at me and said, There is no ghost out there. As I wrote in my journal this night. It made me shiver to think there was A ghost floating around somewhere. I ask my dad the next day As he was out back sitting on the bench with his typewriter. He was a writer, you see. So I ask, why dad, why? Did you know there was an old graveyard out there in the woods? My dad looks up from his typewriter And says: look we bought this house And surrounding property to get away. From the noisy city and traffic jams. As I looked toward the edge of our property I shivered to think there was a ghost looming. 3/2/2018 wrote last night

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Date: 3/6/2019 3:44:00 AM
Haunting tale with a left-over question. I did enjoy the tale Debbie.
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Date: 7/21/2018 8:48:00 AM
We can tame any ghost Just make friends like we are now ----Love it my friend
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Date: 7/3/2018 2:13:00 AM
An eerie topic which is ideal for late night reading, Debbie! Regards // paul
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Date: 3/15/2018 12:24:00 AM
Wonderfully spooky! More!
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Date: 3/13/2018 7:54:00 PM
Interesting beginning Debbie. Where are you leading us, or am I missing something.
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Date: 3/11/2018 5:44:00 PM
this is very intriguing, Debbie!! Like Charlie says, is there a sequel in the works?
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Date: 3/10/2018 10:55:00 AM
Sounds like this write needs a sequel, well done Debbie...
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Date: 3/10/2018 6:05:00 AM
Hi Debbie, I enjoyed this poem so much I wish there were more. This would make a very interesting book. Very imaginative and well done.
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Date: 3/10/2018 4:21:00 AM
Nicely written tale of ghostly encounters..
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Date: 3/4/2018 6:35:00 AM
nice , scary and ghostly,
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Date: 3/2/2018 7:22:00 AM
Hi Debbie , ghostly write will done my friend :::)))) hugs
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Date: 3/2/2018 6:02:00 AM
An interesting tale.Enjoyed reading.
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Date: 3/2/2018 5:54:00 AM
- A scary place to live, Debbie - Great told - Happy weekend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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