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The Wonders of You

When what do my pondering thoughts become Now that your visions and affections have tunneled my way No longer precariously wandering through the confides of my mind Because of you I enjoy your soft graceful ribbons of warmth You feed my need for utter emotion slumbering within your ecstasy Yes I am so grateful for the human bond you’ve reassured me with How could I ever wish for more in the shades of your serene eloquent I swell up with a scarlet blush for the attributes you posture victoriously You believe in me empowering me to abide in my mortal existence Yes I know I’ve challenged your patience from time to time Only to find you’re forgiving arms waiting to grant me your pardon No need to plunge into a rampage of an un-purposeful storm Now I glide speechlessly into the tail winds of your language Tomorrow the sun shall rise high in the tender joy of your eyes Because of the wonders of you! Inspired by Matt Caliri’s “I love you because” contest

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 3/4/2010 11:54:00 PM
This poem is awesome, 'the greatest lesson you will ever learn is how to love, and be loved in return' ;) much love and respect, its a pleasure to read you
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Date: 1/27/2010 4:37:00 PM
Excellent,,beautiful,love and forgivness,patience and care,this must be with the winners,cos it is a gem,indeed..Charma
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Date: 1/22/2010 7:49:00 PM
Great entry Laura.. enjoyed your lead in lines .. interest factor drew me right into reading deeply.. words of love without the use of love.. I entered Cozy Confections.. this was really challenging cause every other word u want to say or use love.. thankxxx for your comments on my "steamy" poem.. more to come like that one... in collaboration form... good luck with this one in the contest.. I am hooked on it already.. luv.. Linda-Marie
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