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The Winning Raffle

The Martin family lived in a rented house across from us, and some of the kids were forced to sleep in a converted bus. There were thirteen kids ‘hell raising’; every one I got to know, but the two I hung around with were Alec and his brother Joe. Joe was not a handsome looker but did very well at school, he scored high marks in sums and would never play the fool. Joe worked odd jobs around the town and was careful with his money, but Alec who was my age - well, he was not a clever ‘bunny’. Alec led Joe on a merry dance long before he’d turned eighteen, and he always carried big ideas, leaving Joe to fix his dream, then walked away to tramp the country with a swag and billy, while Joe built a horse stud from just one stallion and a filly. For some years Alec drifted ‘round; every day he lower sank, while Joe had made his fortune with a million in the bank. A call from Alec was expected but not about some outback cup. He'd entered Joe’s stud stallion a week before he’d rang Joe up. I was working for Joe now and heard the scream of "Bloody Alec!" And when Joe hung up the phone he was looking pale and sick. "I won’t send him my stallion but one you’re better ‘backin’ me’. I'll send him that flamin’ pensioned hack bound for the knackery.” Two days driving dusty roads, Joe’s driver pulled onto the roadside. He went behind to check the float and found the poor old horse had died, but being paid to do the journey, Joe’s driver kept on driving anyway, AND he left the horse with Alec and told Joe the tale next day. Some time went by without contact, then a surprise for Joe one day. A cheque arrived to him from Alec with a note that had him say, "Thank you Joe for that old horse; it surely changed my luck it did. Even though it never got to run I still made two thousand quid.” "Two thousand flamin’ quid!" Joe pondered - "But the bloody horse was dead!" Joe rang Alec who declared, “It couldn’t race, so I raffled it instead.” “What’s that you say!” Joe asked. “You raffled it! But didn’t anyone react.” "Sure" Joe replied, "The winner did - so I gave him his dollar back.”

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Date: 12/4/2021 2:53:00 AM
These brothers knew the difference between right and wrong, but Alec always hedging his bets, eventually choosing beneficial decision,to make an extra buck the, most time the wrong choice, as a con man would. Time he spent more time with Joe, maybe some good would rub off on him. Enjoyed this poem so much Lindsay. Hugs, blessings, Jennifer.
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Lindsay Laurie
Date: 12/4/2021 9:06:00 PM
Hello Jennifer ... whenever gamblers are involved there's always a chance to dupe a few if the odds appear right. I'm pleased you enjoyed this poem Jennifer - Lindsay
Date: 11/24/2021 2:46:00 AM
Great stories such as I love. Well done.
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Date: 12/4/2021 9:03:00 PM
Hello Victor ... I'm pleased you enjoyed this tale even though a scam is involved - thank you Victor - Lindsay
Date: 11/23/2021 11:31:00 AM
Well done, Lindsay...I could read your narratives all day ((had I the time:)) I've been truly entertained. ~ Best regards // paul
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Date: 11/24/2021 9:18:00 PM
Blimey Paul ... you are a glutton for punishment Paul, but in saying that, I feel humble indeed - thank you Paul - Lindsay
Date: 11/22/2021 5:27:00 AM
Oh Man! A con man will always figure a way to get his dollar. Joe does well to avoid his brother. This is another great story my friend. Loved it. God Bless, JB
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Date: 11/24/2021 9:15:00 PM
Hello Judy ... and they're better at getting your dollar if you are greedy. I'm pleased you enjoyed this little tale Judy - Lindsay
Date: 11/20/2021 3:55:00 PM
lol you tell a great story my friend, love your sense of humor and your mighty pen Laurie
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Date: 11/24/2021 9:08:00 PM
Hello Mystic Rose ... it's always better to have readers chuckling than the opposite, but what I really mean is, I'm hopeless at writing serious poetry - thanks Mystic Rose - Lindsay
Date: 11/20/2021 12:03:00 PM
LOL, love this witty write
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Date: 11/24/2021 9:05:00 PM
Hi there Jack ... the dream of gain can put blinkers on once a con man sees the signs - pleased you enjoyed this Jack - Lindsay
Date: 11/19/2021 10:49:00 PM
Thanks for the laugh. It really made my day, ~~
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Date: 11/24/2021 8:58:00 PM
Hello Victor ... when it comes to gaining easy money, watch out. Pleased you got a laugh with this Victor - Lindsay
Date: 11/19/2021 5:26:00 AM
Thank you for the entertaining story today Lindsay. Well done :)
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Date: 11/24/2021 8:56:00 PM
Hello Heidi ... I'm pleased you enjoyed this little tale Heidi - Lindsay
Date: 11/18/2021 7:30:00 PM
:) Very entertaining read. Too serious around here lately, myself included. I've bet on few, watching them run, I wondered if they were alive or dead.
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Date: 11/24/2021 8:54:00 PM
Hello Joe ... I've noticed this also. I'm not capable of being serious. By the way, don't bet on a horse that goes hee-haw - thank you Joe - Lindsay
Date: 11/18/2021 4:04:00 PM
hahaha. What a GREAT story
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Date: 11/24/2021 8:52:00 PM
Hello Andrea ... there's always a cunning hustler when easy money comes easy - thank you Andrea - Lindsay
Date: 11/17/2021 9:38:00 PM
LOL! He's his horse if he never wins a race. A wonderful story! :D
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Date: 11/24/2021 8:50:00 PM
G'day Evelyn ... when it comes to gambling, so comes a cunning scammer. Thank you Evelyn - Lindsay
Date: 11/17/2021 2:18:00 PM
you are king of the punch lines lol, thanks for the smiles Lindsay:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 11/24/2021 8:46:00 PM
Hello Jan ... I'm pleased that you get a smile out of the predicaments - catch you soon Jan - Lindsay
Date: 11/17/2021 9:45:00 AM
DNA tales! Well said and done, Lindsay! You are certainly an Australian treasure!
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Date: 11/24/2021 8:45:00 PM
Hello Rico ... not sure about being a treasure. Perhaps fools gold maybe - thanks again Rico - Lindsay
Date: 11/17/2021 12:00:00 AM
Lol brilliant Lindsay, you write these so well, Tom
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Date: 11/24/2021 8:42:00 PM
G'day Tom ... I'm just happy that you read them and enjoy them - thanks Tom - Lindsay
Date: 11/16/2021 9:37:00 PM
Quid pro quo, you know! Another L.L. special. Thanks for all the laughs, my friend. Smiles for miles, Gershon
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Lindsay Laurie
Date: 11/26/2021 7:20:00 PM
Once again, thank you Gershon for reading and putting up a comment - Lindsay

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