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The Whispering Moon

Whispering, the glistening moon calls to me Softly caressing my worn out soul Sleepy in it's quest to slip by silently, unheard Feeling my restless light, enticing me Hear the whispering night softly alluring lulling sweetly, it's gentle glow Burdened thoughts surrender calmly, silently go Abyss of darkness, creeps faintly drifting in Hush my withered soul soothe my being A whisper distantly touching my spirit gently, peacefully taken. The whispering moon quietly embraces me unheard, at peace I am. Silence.

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John Hardison

Date: 6/2/2016 10:19:00 PM

Powerfully but softly written. Captivated by it. Congratulation on being featured this week. Peace, Love and Joy.

Okanagan Bell
Date: 6/4/2016 2:17:00 PM

if you were to rate this poem what rating would you give it, i really would like to know, thank you again.

Okanagan Bell
Date: 6/4/2016 2:07:00 PM

thank you so much, i love the feeling i get when i reread this poem too...i appreciate your comment.

Seosamh De Burca

Date: 6/2/2016 3:07:00 PM

Congrats on being featured. Great imagery really drew the reader in. Nicely done

Okanagan Bell
Date: 6/4/2016 2:17:00 PM

if you were to rate this poem what rating would you give it, i really would like to know, thank you again.

Okanagan Bell
Date: 6/4/2016 2:08:00 PM

thank you very much, i appreciate your comment and kind words. this poem was written on a beautiful night

Daver Austin

Date: 6/2/2016 10:52:00 AM

Love your whispering moon. After all what could the moon do but whisper. It is so damn far away. I whisper back romantic things. Love, daver

Okanagan Bell
Date: 6/4/2016 2:18:00 PM

if you were to rate this poem what rating would you give it, i really would like to know, thank you again.

Okanagan Bell
Date: 6/4/2016 2:11:00 PM

thank you very much, i appreciate your kind words. the moon is very far away, i live in a beautiful valley and the evening i wrote this, the moon looked very large and very near.

Kathleen Kroll

Date: 5/30/2016 7:01:00 PM

I so loved this poem when I read it. It sets such a mood of serenity. I'll save to read before going to bed. Congrats on being chosen for the home page! Look forward to reading more of yours! Kathy

Okanagan Bell
Date: 6/4/2016 2:18:00 PM

if you were to rate this poem what rating would you give it, i really would like to know, thank you again.

Okanagan Bell
Date: 6/4/2016 2:13:00 PM

thank you so very much, i appreciate your wonderful comment and love the fact that you will reread this before bed. i think it would make a nice lullaby