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The Weather

The drop spreads, freezing Cleaning mist falls from grey skies I see memories In silence we go Water lilies lie around Through the field of stars I'm anew my breath, frozen white by icy air. You were golden sun

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Daver Austin

Date: 12/20/2011 1:45:00 PM

A walk down winter streets, eh? With the stars and the freezing air for inspiration. This is refreshing. Congrats on the selection. daver

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 12/19/2011 8:28:00 AM

Congratulations on your excellent poetry being featured this week Grace. I hope to see you as a premium member in the new year. Love, Carol

Grace Williams
Date: 12/19/2011 9:43:00 AM

Thank you very much! Do you know how one sees the featured poets? I am very curious to see how that works

Patrick Cornwall

Date: 12/6/2011 9:08:00 PM

I love Weathery poems Grace thanks I enjoyed this. Patrick

David Williams

Date: 12/5/2011 10:30:00 AM

Grace, nicely penned, hope this is the first of many..David

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 12/5/2011 5:31:00 AM

A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you Grace. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. Read and comment on their's and they will return in kind. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love and blessing always, Carol