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The Weakness of Love

As out the window I saw him, and without asking permission I fell in love with him, The butterflies of my heart fluttered, My conscious disappeared in the deep shadows of his mystery My heart melted on the flames of lust with blowing winds of fears My soul filled with so much darkness so much cold, I became a wayfarer wandering the lands, Tracing the crumbs of his existing

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 11/7/2015 9:59:00 AM
I liked the way this poem shifted almost over the feelings spectrum..
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Date: 2/7/2015 2:21:00 PM
a very sad and beautiful piece.
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Date: 5/13/2014 10:37:00 AM
Thank you for sharing :) It touched my heart
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Date: 3/1/2014 7:38:00 AM
- Touching, but well written Nadia ! - Have a great weekend. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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