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The Waterfall

Cascading vision channeling it’s own pathway like stained glass crystals tripping over polished stones voiceless but never speechless 09/13/2009

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 4/4/2012 2:05:00 PM
Beautiful description of a waterfall. Congrats on your win, Liz! Love, Kim
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Date: 4/3/2012 10:22:00 PM
LIZ , Congratulations with your beautiful win, in B E Susan's contest.. Have yourself a good night. :-) , luv~PD
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Date: 4/2/2012 6:26:00 PM
Lovely tanka. Congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce
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Date: 4/2/2012 3:44:00 PM
Such a unique take on a waterfall! Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
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Date: 4/2/2012 10:13:00 AM
congrats Liz on an awesome win for this spectacular entry luv.. crystal clear beauty ..
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Date: 4/2/2012 9:21:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved win in Susan's contest Liz. Love, Carol
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Date: 3/21/2012 9:08:00 AM
I can hear the water flow - you paint a nice visual.
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Date: 3/21/2012 6:50:00 AM
Beautiful Liz ! - oxox
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