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The Waiting Game

THE WAITING GAME I'm playing the waiting game, not futilely nor waiting in vain. My delivery, my parcel my expectation; forces me to ambulation. I want it now, my elixir my kisser; sit and lull for the lister; who swore to me a delivery vow. For what do I wait, as the hours grow late? And why won't it come now! Anticipation sloths, it insists I allow, as time cannot expedite it's rate, Heavens! give it to me now! When the bloody hell will it be, is some great force slowing delivery? I must have it. I cannot wait one bit. Wait! I make no demand; we did agree. My tactic is only made idly, and can wait out eternity. Ooohhhhh when I have it in hand! Patience called into my spirit land. I am closer, I count clock's tick's; Calm. Tools down. For it will come around, as it was assured by honor bound. Can you relate to this, my expound? Then I can be more comfortably sound. The duration of stagnation calls for liberation with such I am spared ruination I've gone through elation and vexation and frustration, Yet yes, I will have my placation. This trial and tribulation is vocation of sedation and stagnation. An empty marathon that knows not capitulation. I will have my unification. My determination matches my frustration across the duration. In the end I sidestep ruination and have my elation.

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Date: 12/23/2016 7:41:00 AM
I think it is a good poem. It's nice that you took the time to get so many different ways to describe what was going on.
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Date: 11/21/2016 8:16:00 AM
The premise is good as we all play the "waiting game." The work could be improved with cleaning up the punctuation (to aid understanding and fluidity). A few misspelled words need correcting. Also strive for a more natural spilling forth of words; some lines sound contrived, which takes reader away from the growing anticipation of the longed-for end of your waiting.
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Date: 11/20/2016 3:39:00 PM
I think this is a good poem.
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