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it is a mystery to me. comfort from nowhere. in simple exchanges and nodding of heads. is it scent?. or pheromones?. or just presence?. whatever, it happens -- an understanding of so much more than what is said. here i am not alone. i free myself from the ridicule of the They. and comfort myself in the acceptance of the Us as we wrap up and bind. the craving must be sated. less we starve our brains to insanity.

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Date: 12/23/2017 3:19:00 PM
Dropping by to wish you Merry Christmas. I enjoyed reading this one.
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Sam Toil
Date: 12/23/2017 4:28:00 PM
Thank you so much for your kind regards, Richard. And Merry Christmas to you as well!
Date: 6/2/2014 6:00:00 AM
It is that thing they call soul mates that resounds through this masterfully written poem Ben. I so relate to your words that are spot on!
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Date: 5/20/2014 5:37:00 PM
Sam, I call this communion of like spirits. Very good poem. How is our little Darla? I watch for her.
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Date: 5/15/2014 7:15:00 AM
Ooh I love a good mystery :-P I love that energy of what you describe, what a great experience it is to entwine.
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Date: 5/9/2014 1:03:00 PM
There was a report on TV don't know if on discovery channel or another one like that about what makes one attracted to another and it isn't what we think it is either.Enjoyed reading your work..Thanks for the visit..Sara
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Date: 5/8/2014 2:57:00 PM
This is so masterfully written and expressions profound, Sam. You know, I have been on this site for over 8 years, many different names and many a stages I have danced UPON MANY A STAGES...I hope to be blessed to read more of your poetry in the future. Have a great day! Cindy
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Sam Toil
Date: 5/8/2014 3:13:00 PM
My dear Cindy, I am humbled by your praise. When I read your lovely poetry, I am transfixed by your perception of life. I have only one request to make. Let me see your tender loving face. I crave to see it so that I might attach your lovely image to your lovely poetry. Hugs;) Sam
Date: 5/8/2014 10:52:00 AM
Ben,, wow I am awe struck here.. your words dig deep in my soul.. I understand, your heart... it is deep and the pain from life... digs deep.. you really are a true artist my friend. Brooke
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Sam Toil
Date: 5/8/2014 10:57:00 AM
Dearest Brook, I hunger for your approval. You are such an accomplished poet, I am aglow at your comment thank you. Luv & Hugs;) Ben
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Sam Toil
Date: 5/8/2014 10:54:00 AM
Deborah, thanks for your warm comment. I must say I was afraid to post this one today for some reason. But I thought of your wonderful poem "Tight Rope" and it inspired me to go ahead and let it fly. Hugs;) Sam
Date: 5/8/2014 10:37:00 AM
Hi Sam, This was dreamy and soul soul feelings. Another write me giving you a huge applause. You are like a Poet Laurette to us all~ Thank you for sharing this fine write with us here. Peace, Deborah
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Sam Toil
Date: 5/8/2014 10:59:00 AM
Deborah, thanks for your warm comment. I must say I was afraid to post this one today for some reason. But I thought of your wonderful poem "Tight Rope" and it inspired me to go ahead and let it fly. Hugs;) Sam