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The Uninvited Guests

They both came to visit our home, But they were never invited. They were glad and excited, But we were sad and desperate. Though we tried to avoid them, But they came always forcefully. Then we saw two shiny cute eggs!! Be it hot or cold, it was always in the pot. This is when we started waiting… Beautiful eggs to crack and discover the life. The balcony was exposed to the sun and sky. But one day they defeated the hot and cold!! The babies were too teeny and ugly first. But so soon they became two pretty pigeons!! They flew away to the open sky and its freedom… Below we were standing and witnessed their survival story.

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Date: 3/31/2020 3:56:00 PM
Life is such an incredible story. And you crafted it with such beautiful imagery. You have a lovely poem, my friend. Congratulations on a well-deserved Podium win. JC Hawkens
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Neethu Sivaraj Adiyoli
Date: 4/1/2020 1:05:00 AM
Thank you... This is really motivating :)

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