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The Twilight

The cadent curls recede upon the shore, with fizzle sounds like brushes on a drum, their once brave tune declined forevermore, beneath the growing shades of a beach plum. The shadow fingers stretch along the beach, to close the eyelids of a sleepy sun, on the horizon nodding her last speech, her closing song, as her best time is done. Yet, she leaves fervent images behind, reprints of joyous moments on the sand, or backwash from tides pounding so unkind, a montage of love sketches super grand. Before the final twilight curtain’s drawn, seek to bask in the wonders of each dawn.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2021




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Date: 8/4/2021 11:57:00 AM
Outstanding portrayal of twilight Sean!! Congratulations!
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Sean Kibble
Date: 8/4/2021 3:41:00 PM
Thank you for stopping by
Date: 7/17/2021 10:31:00 AM
In the twilight hours, may the dance still be in you. Congrats
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Sean Kibble
Date: 7/17/2021 4:13:00 PM
Thank You and with you
Date: 7/17/2021 1:04:00 AM
Congratulations on a well-deserved win.
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Sean Kibble
Date: 7/17/2021 1:13:00 AM
Thank you
Date: 7/17/2021 12:22:00 AM
Congrats! Thanks for sharing this... I'm delighted with your final couplet: "Before the final twilight curtain’s drawn, seek to bask in the wonders of each dawn." God bless you.
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Sean Kibble
Date: 7/17/2021 12:45:00 AM
Thank you.

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