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The Truth Stood Downcast

The truth stood downcast in the lie, thinking it was better this way; time would, our feelings, nullify and let the mem’ry fade away. Silhouettes hugging on a pier the truth stood downcast in the lie: “I’ll be home soon, no need to fear” And quiv’ring sobs, her sole reply. Off to battle! By hue and cry, we parted ways, this time for good. The truth stood downcast in the lie: "I cannot love you, as I should." Locked in an unmarked, makeshift tomb rampant regret, my lullaby… upon her heart to ever loom, the truth stood downcast in the lie. 8/18/16 Written for Contest: The Truth Stood Downcast In The Lie Hosted by: John Lawless

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Date: 12/7/2016 11:49:00 AM
Heartbreaking! And so true...So well done. I like this. Big Hugggs. Cap'n Deb
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Date: 8/26/2016 10:14:00 PM
Congrats!
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Date: 8/26/2016 7:37:00 PM
Hi Grahamburglar, Congratulations on your winning write:-) Alexis
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Date: 8/26/2016 2:34:00 PM
Excellent Grahamburglar, congratulations...
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Date: 8/26/2016 2:29:00 PM
Very nicely penned many congrats:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 8/26/2016 12:52:00 PM
This was really well done! Congrats on your fine placement!
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Date: 8/26/2016 10:51:00 AM
Congrats on your placement with this amazing quatern :)-luloo
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Date: 8/26/2016 9:45:00 AM
Congrats!! Sara
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Date: 8/26/2016 9:11:00 AM
OH, this reads like the ever-eternal "Dear John" letters received by soldiers for centuries. Nice work with the quitter. Thanks for participating in the contest.
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