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The Truth Potion

Quote from the original translation Awake! for the morning in the bowl of night, has flung the stone that puts the stars to flight, Lo! the hunter of the East has caught The Sultan’s Turret in a noose of light! Dreaming when dawn’s left hand was in the sky, I heard a voice within the tavern cry, awake my little ones and fill the cup, before life’s liquor in its cup be dry!! Omar Khayyam ‘Rubaiyat’ Persian World is a tavern and time’s liquor is running dry! Drink while there is still time! Wine is wisdom you drink to see the reality of existence and not be swayed by the untruth and the unreal!! ~~~~~~~~~~~~~ The Truth potion - Inspired by the Rubaiyat! in the warmth of fire where embers shine, where greed plays havoc with cries of mine, mine! pour them the taste of that fermented potion, to awaken their soul to bring them in line! in tented tavern amidst commotion, truth frozen, but untruth is in fashion, I feel your lips on my lips to reassure, lips of damsel wine that brings elation! I see the coloured glasses glitter pure, jingle of anklets on bodies demure, dancing to please insolence and wealth, calamity, disease, pretences sans cure. pour me a cup so I can drink to health, to bemoan the tale of truth lost in stealth, in flow of wine there is freedom of breath, liberation of truth, from deep underneath! Tamam shud!( original ending of Rubaiyat) means all clear or the end!! 1st placement Inspired by the Rubaiyat of Omar Khayyam in Persian Translated to English by Scott Fitzgerald Written 10/11/21 Inspired by a translation poetry contest Malabika Ray Choudhury sponsored

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Date: 12/14/2021 8:23:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. A creative story/write. I enjoyed it. Have a blessed day with your win...............
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Krish Radhakrishna
Date: 12/14/2021 9:51:00 AM
Dear Paula thanks very much. Kindest regard!
Date: 12/14/2021 5:39:00 AM
Congratulations on your well-deserved win. You created a lovely romantic poem inspired by Rubaiyat! Really enjoyed! Thank you for participating. Love and best wishes ~ Mala
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Krish Radhakrishna
Date: 12/14/2021 9:50:00 AM
Thanks Mala for my placement and a very original contest! I enjoyed writing my poem! the creativity came from your inspiration.
Date: 12/13/2021 9:54:00 PM
A great work Inspired by the Rubaiyat. Beautifully written. Congratulations!
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Krish Radhakrishna
Date: 12/14/2021 2:58:00 AM
Thank you Christuraj! A difficult one to adapt. Glad you think of it well! BW

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