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The Trials of Meretrix Canto Iii

Diminishing virtues stripped away From the flesh By the fierce brined rods that freely Course thy hot crimson blood; Dry cracked lips attempting to Fashion broken words of compliance That so must needs to be spoken... But...Ohhh, Meretrix... My foolish and innocent child - If you but only could! Consider, Meretrix,..humility! To which pleasure one thus Submitted Guiltily discovers:- The joy in the act or posture of Lowering oneself in relation to Others. For in your anguished dis-repair You will find strength to endure and Embrace:- The acceptance of all your defects And ultimate seduction In the power of your:- "Submission to Divine Grace"! I will adorn you in the yellow Toga Of the Vestal virgins, They whom wise Augusta did abhor; Burden upon you with an Imperial Tax Imposed by perverted Caligula: Whither all Matronly protestations he Didst dismissively ignore; My Tribune forcefully exact - When employing you in the Degenerated role Of my most reluctant Whore! Clasp jeweled anklets abouts your Shapely bones, Decorate upon you like fired and Painted porcelain figurines; Whilst all the while, as your lost mind Bemoans, Choking between involuntary gurgles And low-pained, stifled screams, The gagged mouth bites down Amidst salivating sounds Borrowed from the hurtling Nightmares Of your darkest dreams! For I will lift you higher than the Tallest mountain peak... So you may gaze with awe over all The innumerable Kingdoms and their Proud tyrant Kings; Of the many differing species of all Mankind type things... And of the immeasurable riches They so endlessly seek. Lower you to the solitudes of the Grassed floors That sweep across the sunken Valleys deep; Where, besides enchanted streams, Violated Nymphs quietly weep For Abels broken schemes; Now, tragically, all taken apart; And for the wicked callousness Of fallen man... Whose desperate greeds ripped out His live brothers still beating heart - Then tore at the living throat of The one true Gods Holy Lamb! TO BE CONTINUED...

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Date: 9/3/2017 12:23:00 PM
It sounds like Christs temptations in the desert. Is it Lucifer who is torturing her?
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John Fleming
Date: 9/4/2017 2:22:00 PM
You are perfectly correct in assuming that she is being tempted...but tempted into what? All is not as it might seem, methinks! I am very pleased, and grateful, that you are working your way through the poem, Patricia...it is very decent of you; your comments are very welcome - Much obliged! :) john
Date: 1/19/2016 1:50:00 PM
I enjoy reading these with enough time in between to digest their content. Your meaning in this canto is very clear to me. I look forward to reading your next John.
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John Fleming
Date: 1/20/2016 2:17:00 AM
Please keep with it, Connie. You have intuitively grasped the basic core...But there is so, so much more! Your friend always! :) john
Date: 1/14/2016 2:50:00 AM
Another awesome installment, John. About that line 7 in last stanza...did I get that correctly...you used "schemes" for Abel, not Cain?
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Date: 1/14/2016 8:39:00 AM
Hi, Kim. "Schemes" is one of those words that, in English, can be used in several contexts. I know in what context, Regarding this poem, you refer to: The plotting against some person or persons. However it is also a term used in Algebraic Geometry, and in connection with organized plans. It is the latter (In a good sense) that I refer. Thank you very much for keeping up with this poor "unfortunates" desperate straits...She appreciates it greatly! My very best regards, Kim! :) john
Date: 12/26/2015 2:31:00 PM
epic in storyline and imagery, john... your imagination knows no bounds!.. huggs
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Date: 12/29/2015 6:17:00 AM
So very nice to see you visiting again, Nette - You are always most welcome here! Allow me to take this opportunity to wish you all the very best in the New Year. Thanks for the lovely comments, Nette...They are very much appreciated! My very best regards! :) john
Date: 12/26/2015 9:32:00 AM
You have weaved in the creation story, I see you have a knowledge of scripture. I enjoyed the piece but would caution you on not altering the narrative when it comes to the "One True God's Holy Lamb". For me being a believer that last part about tearing at the living throat, is a stumbling block from moving further into this story. I do though admire your tremendous skill shown in this write.
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Date: 12/26/2015 10:50:00 AM
You have an intrinsic ability that has allowed you to read and understand this poem...many do not. The last verse ends with the death of Abel when slaughtered by Cain. The "One True God", whom I fervently believe in, is an all seeing, all knowing, all powerful, omnipotent being. He may not be exactly as you envision him...But he is the "Great, immortal Creator! As for the "Stumbling block" rest assured the "Lamb of God" is used to signify Cains betrayal of Gods teachings...Not an attack upon God. I hope this goes some way to reassuring you, Richard. My very best wishes! :) john
Date: 12/25/2015 4:58:00 PM
Hi John, I want to Wish you a Merry Christmas and Happy New Year May all your days shine and dreams come true. :) Every day should be a day with family and friends. I appreciate everyone. Sorry to all those I have taken for granted. SHAME ON ME. I promise, 2016 will be a new me. Merry Christmas!!! May the true meaning of the holiday season fill your heart and home. Always & Forever ~LINDA~
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Date: 12/26/2015 1:15:00 AM
Many thanks, Linda! And may I also take this opportunity to wish you a very Christmas and a happy new year. My warmest regards! :-) john

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