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The Tree and Me

Everyday as i pass the old tree i compare myself to the limbs branches hanging lower now leaves dropping and bark scarred the deep roots un-earthed tree house fallen glory days lost in time... Contest: The Old Age Form: Nonet Sponsored by: Dr. Ram Mehta Poems by Shar

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Date: 10/23/2013 8:35:00 PM
Sharon, awesome Nonet form :) congrats... Love ~SKAT~
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Date: 10/22/2013 10:30:00 PM
Sharon, this is one great nonet... CONGRATULATIONS... XOX~ LINDA
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Date: 10/22/2013 3:10:00 PM
Sharon, loved this. I have written three poems about my fondness for trees. Check out sixth sense seduction and From where I stand. Trees tell many stories. But of course it is tree language. Allan
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Sharon Ruebel
Date: 10/22/2013 3:44:00 PM
Hello Allan, Thank you for your kind words and for reading me today! I will look those up for sure. Lov, Shar
Date: 10/21/2013 10:01:00 AM
Congrats on your winning nonet, Sharon! Love and blessings, Rhonda
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Sharon Ruebel
Date: 10/22/2013 12:21:00 PM
Hello Rhonda, Thank you for your congrats. I wish you a beautiful week honey and look forward to reading more from you. Lov, Shar
Date: 10/20/2013 9:09:00 AM
This is awesome work!! No wonder it is in the winners’ list..Sara
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Sharon Ruebel
Date: 10/22/2013 12:20:00 PM
Thank you Sara for visiting and for the always kind words. Lov, Shar
Date: 10/19/2013 1:53:00 AM
wow, I love this one and I loved Sandy Adam's too,about trees and growing old. Congrats on your win.
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Date: 10/18/2013 6:43:00 AM
Congrats on the win in my contest, Shar
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Sharon Ruebel
Date: 10/18/2013 4:21:00 PM
Thank you Dr. Ram, it is always fun to enter. I had a great time during this contest....Smiles, Shar
Date: 10/15/2013 8:28:00 AM
Beautiful poem! Love the message woven into the branches.
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Sharon Ruebel
Date: 10/15/2013 11:34:00 AM
Thank you for visiting! I read a few of your lovely work this morning and I cannot wait to read more! You are so very kind...... Jeep it flowing. As Always, Shar
Date: 10/14/2013 10:37:00 PM
Thanks for the entry, Shar
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Sharon Ruebel
Date: 10/15/2013 11:33:00 AM
Thank you Dr. Mehta, I wouldn't miss it! Shar
Date: 10/14/2013 5:38:00 PM
† Again, Sweet Beautiful Sharon, I Can Easily View Myself Within This Painting. To Take This Child's Truth A Bit Further; If My Own Life Were To Be As This Metaphor Then, A Branch Whom Never Truly Budded ? No Fruit, Just The Scorching Heat Beating Down Upon A Life Dependant; Waiting For Love's Gardener * Fast Forward: Countless Joyous Birds, Lodging Amid Mercy's Thriving Branches ˜ I Can Find Your Priceless Beauty Within This Picture, Too! Good To See You Again, Love, John
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Sharon Ruebel
Date: 10/15/2013 11:32:00 AM
Hello Johnny, so sweet and kind of you to visit. Your messages are always poems within themselves. I Thank you for your kind words and hope you are well and doing fine. As Always, with lov, Shar
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Johnny Rhinem
Date: 10/14/2013 5:53:00 PM
PS., "THE FAITHLESS DO NOT GET IT ? THEIR TOO BUSY CHASING AFTER DUST AND BEING BLIND........, IN THE GHETTO, AKA, PLANET EARTH BUT, AS ANY GHETTO, ONCE UPON A TIME IT WAS PRISTINE AND SPARKLING WITHIN BEAUTY * STILL BEAUTY REMAINS ALL OVER, YET THE HINGES SQUEEK OF NEGLECT AS ABUSE....................., AND THE PUPPET MASTER'S puppet masters PUPPETS ARE IN THE WHITE HOUSE RIGHT NOW FURTHERING THEIR PART WITHIN SUCH ABUSE AND NEGLECT ¿ LOVE AGAIN AS ALWAYS, me *
Date: 10/14/2013 4:44:00 PM
Sharon , love the life message in this poem. Good luck in the contest. Hugs Anne
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Sharon Ruebel
Date: 10/15/2013 11:30:00 AM
Thank you Anne, As the seasons are upon us I have tried very hard to carry on. I know that your feeling it also. My heart and prayers go out to you. Thank you for your always kind words. Lov, Shar

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