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The Trap

If I were a mountain lion I would've been wary and wise back turned safely to the wall watching with careful eyes I would've been cautious, cagey and on the lookout for lies but instead I trusted blindly and fell for your disguise You were my blood relation a tie that was said to bind but when I hit my lowest low you were the most unkind You used me when convenient drained resources, energy exploited my better nature and got the best of me When others acted cruelly telling lies and tearing me down instead of you defending me you disowned me all over town You were the most insidious sneaky, snarky snipe proving true the back-stabbing best-friend stereotype But, at last I found you out your cover fully blown I watched you fall in your own trap and left you there alone

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 12/18/2018 10:52:00 AM
Lord God! This has excited me to my soul... My spirit dances like a redeemed bastard with your lines... Keep on writing dear friend.
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Rhona Mcferran
Date: 12/18/2018 5:45:00 PM
Thank you! I am so glad that you enjoyed this! :)
Date: 12/10/2018 1:30:00 PM
Yes, betrayal is its own insidious pain, but love your strong ending!
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Rhona Mcferran
Date: 12/10/2018 3:00:00 PM
Thank you, my friend! ;)
Date: 12/8/2018 10:06:00 AM
Ooh sharp ink! It bleeds! Awesome read! xomo
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Rhona Mcferran
Date: 12/8/2018 11:22:00 AM
Thank you so much!! "The pen is mightier than the sword"... ;)
Date: 12/7/2018 4:35:00 PM
Went straight to my FAV list, and it was therapeutic I imagine, also.
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Rhona Mcferran
Date: 12/7/2018 6:05:00 PM
Glad it made your fave list!! Yes, it was very therapeutic... I saw a prompt called "back stabbers" and thought, "Wow, I've definitely got material for that one!" It was a toss-up between workplace and family backstabbers... and family won (as they cut deeper).

Book: Shattered Sighs