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The Tower Rebuilt

I shall resolve to leave this Place now... And steadfastly search out, Nestling between ridge and bluff Amidst the folds of a foreign Land, Several acres of unkempt ground Fallow and rough; Upon which stands... Crumbled stone walls With an exposed slate roof in Some state of disrepair, And a rounded brough Complete with smooth, Well trodden steps Twisting around a narrow stair. An Inglenook, therein, Will I construct, With deep reveals to cheer me In my idling days, And wide spanning arch To sit before and stay the onset Of this old age... And all its creeping ills; While in all the subtle crafts In which I was taught to be so ably Skilled: Rebuild this castle Inside the wistful echos Of these deeply-spilling And far resounding hills. Then, with mind well set, complete with muscles willing Sinew And perspirations honest sweat, I shall toil upon this task; For a little more precious time, Coupled with fortitude and Diligence, In truth, is all one my humbly ask. And by my will... And by my command - Raise up these fallen blocks Once more Upon this goodly land. For could it happen that Every night, Before I gladly retire, I glimpse a trace of those whose Face Haunt the hot flames of my steady Fire? Disregarding manifested nightly Shadows, That, in their lonely spectral Travels, Creep across old squeaking boards... Lain at right angles Over the creaking joists Hidden under ingrained, Dusty, oaken floors. And placing down my thick and Heavy, Red leather-bound book I reach across for thread, Sharp needle and hook; When picking up the threadbare Blue-velvet rags... I stitch in the bright silvery stars We once eagerly reached for, But did not quite grasp, In our younger days as lustier Lads; Perhaps pausing in mid-motion, With a rueful look, To pensively consider of that Weary road One lone stray drummer, Still steadily drumming - Steadfastly took. Consider! Accession is but a Trifle - The anointed destiny of all Royal Kings... And all earthly prizes pale asides Whatever riches accumulated Wisdom gradually brings: Born of labor, Re-doubled effort, Born of non-compromise... And fated, Gently resigned, nodding sighs. Rising now on upright stiffening Bones... Listening to the dark hours Belated howls Rise over the laments Of the Lime-torched rafters Swelling moans; And, plodding slowly upwards Of my bell-less tower - Seek out welcome sleep Within my shaking, wind swept Bower! Slung low under the eastern Point Of a sharp crested Moon... The radiant Dog-Star Floods its rainbow colours through Narrowed slits Of the high turreted room. Port-side lies my yawing bed Rigged-out in white linen sheets; Amidships my mattress spread - Two firm pillows serve as cabin To plunge about my weary head! Storm rages down... And storm blows below - Redoubtable little boat Swung back and fro! Tossed and tipped from trough To pitch: Resolute timbers - Lashed afloat This angry ditch! Caught in the deep channel Of my chaotic bind... To seek safe haven I do Endeavour to find: A safe harbour on some newly Formed virgin shore; Along whose gentle currents My sturdy tiller swings... And now steers for - Upon the white spumes Of a steady bore. Now... Far, far, far above, Past where Andromeda yields, And Hercules, who upon the head Of Draco kneels; And far, far, far beyond Interstellar dust - Adorned the blazing Constellations Throng... I walk between the milky-ways Of sunlit nights and shinning Eternal days... Which relentlessly spiral Aboard boundless rays. For, it seems, that a man can voyage over the unfathomable Bars To chase his elusive dreams Among the crowded stars; Where, cutting the black voids With heavens lights: Hissing crystal tails of vaporous Comets - Condense within the blazing trails Of burning meteorites! Indeed! Men may sail on celestial Seas - As they traverse the showering Heights: Exploding forth in grandest Majesties In golden realms of the Gods Hurled smites! Seek their solace upon Eternities Unending oceans - Their fortunes blown by solar winds: Mortal souls searching in perpetuity Until the dawning revelry then Rescinds. Answering the call to old Gabriels Horn, As dappling sunlight creeps across My undaunted little tower, I open my eyes to the new born Morn - When summoned to the beckoning Hour. Descending from my fortified Might, Reinforced with new found zeal, I reflect upon this newly provoked Insight - As the happy chapel bell begins To joyously peel! So awaken, Herald! And usher in ennobled thoughts, For enlightenment sought, Inside where aspirations deem To dwell. Just as the planted seeds, Of much great nourished deeds, Do so germinate - all naysayers to Dispel; As all lofty creeds, Must at some point, Readily concede, in time, To the bleak tolling Of the cruel fates final knell! Therefore, put yourself to the Immediate task, Against all obstacles however Mean or extreme, Whilst upon the faithful handle Firmly grasp Of worn tools whose blades are Worthy and keen. When bending your strong back To take the strain, Denying any quarter or appeals To moderate refrain, Over adversity you justifiably Deign: Your laudable goals, Thus, to surely attain. Hear me then! Build tall your Broughs, Withstanding fancies flight, Disregarding all those Who may well try: Seek to disparage, ridicule and Slight. Suffer not scoffers, knaves And braying fools But raise up your proud Monuments Wherever you should most joyfully Choose! For in among the ruins where Failure steals: So prevails triumph - To forever chase his grim presence From your low-rubbled fields! My gratitude to my good friend Mr George Dee Vuy for inspiring me to conceive these last three verses with the beautiful word..."Ennobled"!! Many thanks, George!

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Date: 9/8/2017 9:42:00 AM
I love words, their taste and texture. I love your words because they are a feast.
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John Fleming
Date: 9/11/2017 3:13:00 AM
Thanks, Patricia. I rather enjoyed writing this one; but, like most of my poems, it needs some serious editing -- All in good time! My very best regards, Patricia - Cheers! :) john
Date: 3/9/2017 9:09:00 AM
Magnificent! I do not say that lightly. I must return to get the full meaning and import of this sojourn but I do so connect with the emotion expressed--the triumphs and the failures over a lifetime. I especially like the last stanza-- But raise up your proud monuments wherever you should most joyfully choose! You do that so well, John. Take care, good friend. Kathy
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Date: 3/21/2017 2:38:00 PM
Hello again, Kathleen...Always so very nice to see you putting in an appearance on my page; I hope everything is well with you, and you are in good health and spirits. Thank you for your lovely comments - they are much appreciated! I enjoyed, very much so, writing this poem...It contains all of my own personal ideologies all the way through. My very best regards, Kathy...And, of course, my warmest wishes as ever. Your good friend. :) john
Date: 10/11/2016 10:03:00 PM
Great. This one and the others of yours that I've read are by far the best poems that I found so far on this cite. Very good imagery. Very Wordsworth-like.
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Date: 10/16/2016 3:30:00 PM
Jerome - You are most welcome! Please excuse the overly long delay concerning my reply...Unfortunately I have been rather "Laid-up" of late. Many thanks for the fantastic comments - Much appreciated! My very best regards, Jerome. :) john
Date: 8/26/2016 9:51:00 PM
Breathtaking. I will have to read this many more times to fully savor it. I love your phrases and the atmosphere and am so glad to have found your work. This is a fave. All the best, Agnes
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Date: 8/27/2016 6:08:00 AM
Agnes, I am so very glad to have formed this new friendship with your good self. Rest assured I will be repaying you with a visit in the very near future...Many thanks, and...My very warmest wishes! :) john
Date: 2/18/2016 9:22:00 AM
This is wonderful and lovely. Nice poetry here dear friend.
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Date: 2/18/2016 9:54:00 AM
Hello, Funom. So very nice to see you visiting again. Thank you for the kind comments - Much appreciated! My very best regards to you, Funom! :) john
Date: 12/7/2015 11:02:00 PM
John, I so enjoyed the inspiring journey your masterpiece of a poem took me on, and tonight when I sleep and I set sail on "celestial seas" I will think of you and hope to be in your fine company! I adored this! My eyes wouldn't let me enjoy reading this lengthy endeaver before now. I am working on that. Blessings my dear friend.
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Date: 12/8/2015 6:28:00 AM
My dearest Connie: What wonderful accolades you do so accord me...such lovely sentiments! An amazing voyage it would truly be: A journey of unending discovery after mind-blowing discovery through the spiraling orbits of endless stars! One day, in the very distant future, some lucky souls will gaze upon these wonders of what we can only dream of - But dreams are what inspire us all to achieve greater things ! My warmest wishes as always Connie. :) john
Date: 12/1/2015 8:30:00 AM
I am truly impressed, this is an exceptional piece. I can see you have put a lot of thought into this work. It appears hard work does pay off.
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John Fleming
Date: 12/1/2015 11:34:00 AM
Hello, Richard. Nice to see you visiting once again - you are always most welcome! Thank you very much for the high praise and kind comments - They are much appreciated! My very best regards to you, Richard! :-) john
Date: 11/28/2015 4:38:00 PM
this journey of the mind will write, upon the mists of time, ever skilful in the quest, endows another rhyme...
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Date: 11/29/2015 4:53:00 AM
Nicely rhymed, Don! Thanks for the visit to my page. My best regards to you! :) john
Date: 11/26/2015 8:47:00 AM
John you are one of the best writers I have ever read. Thank you for this beautiful gift you have laid on this page. A pure joy to read over and over. This is a fav for me. love always, armand
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Date: 11/26/2015 12:05:00 PM
Armand, it is so very good to see you appearing on my page once again! I have truly missed your presence - you have been sorely missed by all! I hope everything is good with you now, my friend. My very warmest regards and well wishes...many thanks, Armand! :-) john
Date: 11/25/2015 9:39:00 AM
I like to go back after I have read a poem, and read all the comments about it. You certainly hit the jackpot with this one. Your comments about publishing led me to return to comment further. You were correct when you said it probably needed editing, but you can do that yourself. Never let a poem rest, revise, revise, revise is the secret. This one deserves it. Form a local poetry group, and invite members. It works. Our group meets once a month. Fun, fun!
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Date: 11/26/2015 3:21:00 AM
Thank you, Cona, for taking the time out to make another visit, and thank you for all your kind words and advice - much appreciated! Cheers! :-) john
Date: 11/24/2015 6:42:00 AM
This isn't just a poem, it is an epistle. An amazing seven for me.
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Date: 11/25/2015 1:11:00 AM
Hi, Cona. It is nice to see you writing poetry once again. Many thanks for the visit and kind comments; much obliged! My very best regards! :-) john
Date: 11/23/2015 7:35:00 AM
A tremendous poetic structure that reaches the heights of heaven! Excellent , dear John! A seven!
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Date: 11/23/2015 12:11:00 PM
Thank you, Demetrios, for your kind words - Much appreciated! A pleasure for me to see you visiting once again. My very best regards! :-) john
Date: 11/16/2015 12:24:00 PM
looking forward to your next surprise, john.. huggs
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Date: 11/16/2015 2:08:00 PM
Hi, Nette. I have three epics on the go, one from years back. Might be able to upload one of them in a couple of weeks. Nice to see you dropping by. My very warmest regards! :-) john
Date: 11/14/2015 2:45:00 PM
Oh, WOW, John! You have truly wowed me with this epic write! It's genius...like one of the classics, I could read this over and over again...to my FAVs...I thank you for your visit to my page last week. Your kind words encouraged me to put pen to paper again. Hugs, Rhonda
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John Fleming
Date: 11/14/2015 4:24:00 PM
Rhonda I will never forget how you inspired me to write "Hidden Beauty". It is, and will always be, the most powerful piece of poetry I will ever conceive...I put everything into it. It is my poem - But your inspiration! I dedicate it to you without a moments hesitation. Your friend always... :-) john
Date: 11/7/2015 11:29:00 AM
John, this is truly pure genius! You are a master weaver of poetic tales and I am totally captivated by your words and expressions that artfully transported to another place and time! WOW and a 7! Pandita
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Date: 11/7/2015 12:47:00 PM
Thank you, Pandita. These are very gracious remarks you award me - I am most obliged! I am happy to read that you enjoyed the poem...I really did quite enjoy writing it. Please visit again whenever you have time. My warmest regards, Pandita! :) john
Date: 11/6/2015 4:36:00 PM
My oh my. What a reintroduction to Poetry Soup John. I was here about 5 years ago when my emotions were all over the place after my separation. So nice that a master such as you would be the first to comment positively on my feeble efforts. I straight away thought of Innishfree.
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Date: 11/6/2015 4:49:00 PM
Thank you so much, Jean. You are most perceptive! The poem is indeed inspired by Yeats masterpiece: "The Lake Isle of Innisfree". The genius of William Butler Yeats has had the biggest impact upon my style of writing along with that other great genius, Byron. My warmest regards, Jean. :) john
Date: 11/1/2015 3:45:00 PM
a towering piece ablaze with powerful metaphors of rebirth, john... huggs
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Date: 11/2/2015 9:13:00 AM
Thank you, Nette. I have edited and re-edited since you last viewed the poem; it is a far better read now I feel. Thanks for the visit and high praise, Nette...I always enjoy seeing you come around - You are most welcome here at anytime! My warmest regards! :) john
Date: 10/31/2015 8:06:00 PM
Wow, such an epic, excellent write, John! I'm so glad I came by to read your poem and see how the "masters" write :) Wonderful!
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Date: 11/1/2015 2:24:00 AM
Laura...You have given me a wonderful accolade - Thank you! It is so nice to see you visiting once again; you are always most welcome here at anytime. My very best regards as always, Laura! :) john
Date: 10/30/2015 3:35:00 PM
Interesting. Makes one question: Did I get the meaning right? But then, poetry's a trip through emotions, that's, after all, the main point. This you did and did it well.
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Date: 10/30/2015 7:16:00 PM
Hi, Bob. Nice to make your acquaintance! You are, in my opinion, spot on regarding your comments about emotion being the essence of poetry. This poem is all about a solitary man evaluating his life. He determines to sell what he owns and buys a ruin in a foreign land. With what is left of his slowly diminishing strength he strikes out alone to build his dream and leave his legacy. I know of this man. My very best regards! :-) john
Date: 10/25/2015 6:04:00 PM
such eloquent writing. Very classy. who is the George that inspired you?
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Date: 10/26/2015 1:50:00 AM
Why our very own George Dee Vuy! A gentleman and a scholar...A thinking man! It was George who inspired the last three verses when I was wondering aloud how to finish it off. He made a comment and used the word: "Ennobled". Wow...what a great word! Thanks George! Nice to see you visiting again, Andrea...My very best regards to you! :-) john
Date: 10/24/2015 6:07:00 PM
I am blessed to have found and read this true work of art my friend.With no second thoughts about it , adding this superb write to my fav list here! A pure pleasure to read this magnificent poem!7
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Date: 10/25/2015 3:41:00 AM
Robert, it is a great pleasure to see you visiting once again. Thank you for your generous and kindly comments...They are much appreciated! All the very best, Robert! :-) john
Date: 10/24/2015 6:06:00 PM
I am blessed to have found and read this true work of art my friend.With no second thoughts about it , adding this superb write to my fav list here! A pure pleasure to read this magnificent poem!7
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Date: 10/24/2015 3:50:00 PM
An excellent epic poem that follows in the footsteps of a saga. I don't usually go for long poems, John, but I must admit that this one kept my attention right up to the very end. Indeed, an inspired offering which I even read for a second time! a fav!! ~ Regards // paul
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Date: 10/25/2015 3:34:00 AM
I am pleased you enjoyed the poem, Paul...Very pleased! Your comments are always of value to me. Your visit is much appreciated as always! My very best regards, Paul. :-) john
Date: 10/24/2015 3:47:00 AM
Spent the greater part of the past 15 minutes just reading and rereading, silently or aloud, this masterpiece, John. You outdid yourself! My favorite is the last stanza, with a gentle admonish for us to "Build tall your Broughs, Withstanding fancies flight, Disregarding all those Who may well try: Seek to disparage, ridicule and Slight. Suffer not scoffers, knaves And braying fools ". The last 5 lines brings it to a resounding and grand eloquent conclusion. 7 and FAV. A POTM material. hugs!
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John Fleming
Date: 10/24/2015 10:32:00 AM
Kim, I am deeply touched by your most generous and very gracious comments...As always you give me so much encouragement - Many, many thanks! My very best regards as always! Your friend... :) john
Date: 10/24/2015 1:35:00 AM
Wow...beautiful work here...stanza four is particularly intriguing.." it seems, that a man can voyage over the unfathomable Bars To chase his elusive dreams Among the crowded stars" love those lines...beautiful work as always...Laura
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Date: 10/24/2015 10:28:00 AM
Hi, Laura. It is so nice to see you visiting once again. I always look forward to your visits; I am pleased that you enjoyed the poem. I have to confess: That I rather like it myself. Many thanks for the lovely comments you have left me - They are much appreciated! My very best regards! :) john
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