The Tattoo

There once was a girl from Patchew Who wanted a flower tattoo. When she pulled out her rump The artist went "thump!" So she ended up using just glue.

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Gershon Wolf

Date: 1/26/2020 8:33:00 PM

Thanks for the belly laugh, Jean! How that thump made me jump! --- Theodore Geisel

Jean Bush
Date: 1/26/2020 9:03:00 PM

Thank you sir.

Running Wolves

Date: 1/15/2020 11:47:00 AM

hmmm... with a thump and a rump and flowers and glue, what will the poor... Patchewians do... hang glider named spider...with flower tattoos...lands for the rescue...hope he misses the glue...sticky stuff ya knows....bwahahahahaha

Jean Bush
Date: 1/26/2020 9:02:00 PM

Well, you know, Robert, that genius must simmer slowly to bring forth that rare fragrance of excellence. So keep on sniffin', you won't be missin'. Not far from now I'll take my bow.

Running Wolves
Date: 1/17/2020 10:03:00 PM

Hmmm... Well now... You slackin... I mean I've read everything you've posted... So like... Get with the program here missy... I need to read...Bwahahahaha

Jean Bush
Date: 1/15/2020 11:50:00 AM

You are so crazy!! I love it! I hope she doesn't fall behind! Hahahaha!

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 1/14/2020 4:41:00 PM

lol

Jean Bush
Date: 1/14/2020 5:01:00 PM

Thanks, Pixie.

Gershon Wolf

Date: 1/14/2020 11:49:00 AM

Ha, ha! Jean, you have succeeded --- where eagles dare! --- in putting the beloved town of Patchew on the map!! Kudos, Jean. Best wishes, Gershon (and thanks for all of your comments on poetry yesterday!) :) gw

Jean Bush
Date: 1/14/2020 2:40:00 PM

I have to say, Gershon, your comments are as interesting your poems:)

Jean Bush
Date: 1/14/2020 12:10:00 PM

Thanks, Gershon, always a pleasure to talk to you. Your work is always worth commenting on.