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THE SPANISH FLY

In the realm where passion blooms, Beneath the moon's enchanting gloom, A melody of love unfolds, Inspired by tales the heart beholds. Oh, in the whispers of the Spanish night, Harmonies' notes ignite the light, A flame that dances, wild and free, A serenade that binds you and me. Guitar strings strumming, like a lover's touch, Igniting embers that yearn so much, In every chord, a tale untold, Of love that's fiery, and oh, so bold. Spanish Fly, a potion so divine, In the rhythm of your heartbeat, I find, A symphony of passion, a dance so sweet, In the twilight where two souls meet. Strings that play a virtuoso's embrace, Guiding us through this timeless space, As David's voice serenades the sky, Our love unfolds, like Spanish Fly. In the echoes of that timeless song, Our hearts entwined, forever strong, A ballad written in the stars above, A testament to this boundless love. So let the music carry us away, To a place where love will always stay, In the essence of each note's sigh, We find our bliss, like Spanish Fly. :: 11.15.2023 :: NOTES: As a Poet, I would say "The Spanish Fly" is a mesmerizing and evocative poem that weaves a tapestry of love and passion. The poet skillfully employs vivid imagery and rhythmic language to transport the reader into a realm where emotions are heightened, much like the influence of the Spanish Fly itself. The opening lines set the stage with a vivid description of a romantic atmosphere, using celestial imagery with the moon's enchanting gloom and a melody of love unfolding. This immediately captures the reader's attention and draws them into the poem's emotive landscape. The use of the term "Spanish Fly" serves as a metaphor for a potent and enchanting force, bringing an element of mystery and allure to the poem. It becomes a symbol of the intensity and intoxication of love, expressed through the harmonies and guitar strings that ignite a flame dancing wild and free.

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Date: 11/16/2023 12:41:00 AM
Delightfully melodic. Great job.
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Ernest Robles
Date: 1/4/2024 9:34:00 PM
Thank you so very kindly.

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