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The Sky Falls

The sky falls Piece by piece, tumbling, Crashing, silently. I pick up one piece, Then another, and Try to put them back. Finally I stop, you see, I'm not tall enough To reach the sky.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 1/24/2017 8:09:00 AM
I'm not tall enough to reach the sky. That was wonderful. Loved it. We can connect this poem to many things.
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Date: 1/23/2017 8:33:00 AM
Beautiful and simple very lovely write I enjoy the ending as I am not tall enough to reach the sky either.
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Date: 8/19/2016 10:22:00 PM
Simple and intense. Great work :)
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Beverly Read
Date: 9/2/2016 12:21:00 PM
Thank you for reading it and liking it...and commenting such nice things.
Date: 8/16/2016 3:58:00 PM
Thank you for the nice comments. I'm certainly going to get a swelled head (smile).
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Date: 8/16/2016 3:47:00 PM
though a simple poem , this one is actually quite brilliant. GREAT job, Beverly.
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Beverly Read
Date: 9/2/2016 12:20:00 PM
Andrea, what a beautiful word to use to describe my poem - brilliant. Thank you from the bottom of my heart.

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