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The Silence of An Empty House

The silence of an empty house Once I craved the silence Seeking peace and quiet Now the silence is deafening Each day without my spouse I go room to room Seeking, hoping, left with despair The silence echoing in my ears The noise more than I can bear If only I could hear the whisper in my ear I love you It is you I adore Then I would whisper back I love you more The silence of an empty house Is deafening to my ears Yet I can hear my heart breaking And the drop of every tear Goodbye My Love

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Date: 6/26/2018 9:02:00 AM
Congratulations on your top win with this well-written yet so sad poem. Well done!
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Shirley Rebstock
Date: 6/27/2018 8:35:00 AM
Thank you
Date: 6/19/2018 7:13:00 AM
I can imagine in your poem the person alone remembering a tearful past. My compliments, Shirley and thank you for your kind comment.
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Shirley Rebstock
Date: 6/26/2018 8:28:00 AM
Thanks, I appreciate that.
Date: 6/18/2018 4:44:00 PM
wow, this is so sad and filled with longing. I like it very much, Shirley.
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Shirley Rebstock
Date: 6/24/2018 7:26:00 PM
Thank you, Andrea. I always love your poems.
Date: 5/23/2018 7:33:00 PM
Nice Sherley...You expressed it well...All the best
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Shirley Rebstock
Date: 6/12/2018 8:00:00 PM
Thank you
Date: 5/23/2018 5:00:00 PM
Well written Shirley :)
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Shirley Rebstock
Date: 6/12/2018 8:00:00 PM
Thank you

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