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The Shape of Dreams

…the shape of dreams …ocean glass blunted drunk on pebble tumble by deep winter wave mortal cut sparks of fire effervescent stirs in old memory colors tossed beautiful with the flick of the sun nimble cheek kisses on cold wind find a wandering tear

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Date: 1/14/2024 5:00:00 AM
Well composed. Enjoyed in full. Keep it up. Blessings.
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Mat Ignacio
Date: 1/15/2024 1:11:00 PM
thank you and blessings to you as well
Date: 1/9/2024 7:48:00 AM
Your poem demonstrates impeccable artistry and skill. It is truly a work of beauty, Mat. Your distinct and original expression is a delightful experience for readers. Wishing you continued success and inspiration.
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Mat Ignacio
Date: 1/9/2024 7:38:00 PM
thank you kindly
Date: 1/1/2024 11:23:00 AM
...nice write.....reminds one of long past adventurous watching lightning over the lake.....stan
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Mat Ignacio
Date: 1/1/2024 4:43:00 PM
a warm memory - thank you for sharing
Date: 12/29/2023 3:44:00 AM
I love your opening line, Shape of dreams, ocean glass. Very creative and unique start to a deep and intriguing write. Pleasure reading your work always. Sending you light
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Mat Ignacio
Date: 1/1/2024 4:42:00 PM
light to you as well
Date: 12/27/2023 7:54:00 PM
This is truly beautiful, Mat. Your way of putting things is unique and quite frankly quite a pleasue to read. All the best for your writing in the new year!
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Mat Ignacio
Date: 12/27/2023 7:55:00 PM
all the best to you also, paige
Date: 12/27/2023 6:21:00 AM
this one is deep..
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Mat Ignacio
Date: 12/27/2023 7:54:00 PM
thank you
Date: 12/27/2023 1:43:00 AM
Great the way you've put these words together to suggest the shape of dreams, good write Mat
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Mat Ignacio
Date: 12/27/2023 7:54:00 PM
take care