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The Rose

A caterpillar ran along my bedroom floor and rested there my kitty cat mewed it a song and up it sent a yearning stare I picked it up, the crawling thing all green and wobbly and naive "my thorns beware because they sting" I said and paused fearing he'd leave. The kitty looked up from below and shook my stem to make him fall but he held fast and she lay low then shivered as she heard me call: "Darling," I said, "don't be so grim, my rosy perfume is for you as much as for your brother, dream, for cats and worms I'll be a rose prickly and motherly and true."

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Date: 2/7/2015 2:40:00 AM
beautifully painted piece archontoula
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 2/8/2015 2:16:00 PM
you have a blessed evening
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Archontoula Alexandropoulou
Date: 2/8/2015 12:32:00 PM
Thank you, Liam. You picked one of my favourite words to comment on the poem: "painted." Have a colourful evening
Date: 10/26/2013 2:13:00 AM
The right cat would have made a meal of that pillar.
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Date: 10/26/2013 3:40:00 AM
the right cat... would have done so, yes... I hope the one I have at home is one who will happily surprise me :)
Date: 10/23/2013 9:12:00 PM
...:) , congratulations in The rose (Allegory) contest................. SKAT
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Archontoula Alexandropoulou
Date: 10/26/2013 3:45:00 AM
thanks, SKAT, loved your colours contest....
Date: 10/22/2013 11:18:00 PM
Hi AA.... CONGRATULATIONS... always & forever~ LINDA
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Date: 10/26/2013 3:46:00 AM
Thank you, Linda. Congratulations on your win, too. Archontoula
Date: 10/19/2013 1:32:00 PM
A great stuff of poetry. Keep on writing rhyming pieces.
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Date: 10/26/2013 3:51:00 AM
I will, and you can check the truth of my words first hand, Comby
Date: 10/19/2013 12:23:00 PM
A great wining work...love the win dear!
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Date: 10/26/2013 3:50:00 AM
thanks, Litan
Date: 10/19/2013 5:37:00 AM
Congrats on your winning work..Way to go!!!Sara
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Archontoula Alexandropoulou
Date: 10/26/2013 3:50:00 AM
thank you, sara. I liked your visual piece, too.
Date: 10/17/2013 12:57:00 AM
A most charming write.. ken
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Archontoula Alexandropoulou
Date: 10/26/2013 3:48:00 AM
thank you, Ken.
Date: 10/15/2013 4:42:00 PM
Intriguing read... creativity galore.... Congratulations on your win...... Jake
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Date: 10/16/2013 3:45:00 PM
congratulations to you as well!!
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Date: 10/16/2013 3:37:00 PM
Thank you, Jake, for your kind words. Archontoula
Date: 10/15/2013 7:56:00 AM
Congrats on the win in the contest,
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Date: 10/16/2013 3:50:00 PM
I liked your poem, too
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Date: 10/16/2013 3:38:00 PM
Thank you! Archontoula
Date: 10/15/2013 7:34:00 AM
Congrats on your winning placement, Archontoula! I enjoyed reading this morning! Have a great day...Love and blessings, Rhonda
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Date: 10/16/2013 3:54:00 PM
Congratulations to you as well, Rhonda! May you always write like this Archontoula
Date: 10/14/2013 12:31:00 AM
what a delightful write.
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Date: 10/16/2013 4:06:00 PM
kind words, kind heart. Thank you Jancarl liked your titles and your poems, flowing like bits of meaning-laden rain drops. Archontoula
Date: 10/7/2013 3:28:00 PM
wonderful write...best wishes
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Date: 10/16/2013 4:08:00 PM
Thank you, Joseph. Congrats on your win, too!! loved the warm colours of your poem Archontoula

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