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The Restless Sea Historical Quatrain For Contest

THE RESTLESS SEA As dawn swept 'way the morning stars A gloomy Helen glared Poor Paris stood in silence-- watched-- He’d kiss her if he dared. The sea was raging round their heads The men rowed without cease The lovers headed to their doom-- A myth is birthed in Greece Ten thousand ships launch in pursuit Rough soldiers flex their knees-- Today hunt thieves tomorrow queens-- Men do what kings will please The soldiers puked and gambled hard Twas boredom that they feared A seasick trip was just a jaunt-- The Trojan shore appeared The glory grew beyond Troy’s walls The truth no one can trust…. Dark tragedy writ in the books-- Tis flung among the dust. Victoria Anderson-Throop 1/14/13

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 2/11/2013 6:47:00 AM
Congrat's on the contest. An enjoyable, gritty account.
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Date: 2/11/2013 4:37:00 AM
Congrats on your win! I loved the way you did this!
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Date: 2/11/2013 2:14:00 AM
What an awesome and interesting write that kept me tied to each line! No wonder it garnered first place Victoria. I loved it. CONGRATULATIONS!
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Date: 2/10/2013 9:52:00 PM
Congratulations Victoria. ....Seren
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Date: 2/10/2013 8:48:00 PM
Victoria, this is one of my favorite contest... love it... Congratulations, with your amazing poems. Always~ LINDA
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Date: 2/10/2013 7:38:00 PM
Well done. An exciting entry and wonderful win. Congratulations. Love, Joyce
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Date: 2/10/2013 6:10:00 PM
Ahh poor Helen they always blame the woman! ;) Congrad's on your win! Light & Love
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Date: 2/10/2013 5:19:00 PM
The reasons of war are many and you picked a clever topic for your write. I love the poem as much as the story. RAY
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Date: 2/10/2013 12:45:00 PM
Enjoyed this !! I remember this topic from school days. Of course they only touched on the facts known. Excellent write and Congratulations on a first place win !!
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