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The Red Broken Shape (Looks Like a Heart)

one broken, one delivered what does make it so difficult? Unpredictable to know silence to expect how fragile can it be, how long can it take... just a wind of words destroyed what took years to built just seconds of speech saved their breath. two different paths separated by a card each of them with a piece of the round shape no one wants to keep the end no one with the V-shape. The red turned into black and the two half circles are no longer next to each other the red organ shape, broken from the top to the bottom.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 10/3/2010 5:08:00 PM
excellent use of words my friend thank you for sharing [duncan]
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Date: 10/2/2010 2:17:00 PM
Very creative and expressive write on The red broken shape, really interesting Ruth
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