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The Ravishing Rain

Drizzling, dazzling splinters of diamond           Shards of crystal or  liquidized glass!       Transparent drops from a translucent sky.        Ooh, that lucid lustre: No wonder they say, there's something sexy about the rain Atleast it does seem to drive       dripping lovers insane.        And then as if frenzied, suddenly excited the drizzle converts into a heavy downpour          as thunders bellow and thunders roar     as rivers swell and rivers soar. Rain battering our rooftop        like needless war drums or heedless bass drums      The heavens having opened to announce a cloud burst Till it's said to be raining cats and dogs or more realistically, fishes and frogs!             O' God bless the nimbus Those soaking cotton wool puffs in the sky Those candy floss rainclouds sailing by.

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Date: 1/3/2024 3:09:00 PM
This is lovely, S. Zaynab! I live in the US desert southwest so rain is magnificent! I especially love your last stanza. Take care.
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Date: 1/1/2024 4:03:00 PM
There’s something special about ravishing rain, especially when it dances on the window pane. A lovely write… Belle
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Date: 12/29/2023 8:00:00 AM
Love watching and hearing the rain. Something magical about it and your words fit perfectly with the image. Very nice Zaynab! :)
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Date: 12/29/2023 5:46:00 AM
There is definite excitement in watching rain fall and hearing the accompanying musical segment. I enjoy it personally and your poem captures the feeling perfectly.
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Date: 11/25/2023 8:12:00 AM
Congratulations dear friend on your inclusion of your awesome poetry in Poetry Soups third Anthology - Reflections on the Important Things. Blessings, Jennifer.
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S.Zaynab Kamoonpuri
Date: 12/28/2023 11:41:00 AM
Warmest thanks dear.
Date: 9/23/2023 5:51:00 PM
I too love the rain. Great poem!
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S.Zaynab Kamoonpuri
Date: 10/12/2023 9:31:00 PM
Warm thanks , nice to know.
Date: 9/2/2023 5:15:00 PM
Beautifully written! Enjoyed reading
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S.Zaynab Kamoonpuri
Date: 10/12/2023 9:30:00 PM
Warm thanks for feedback dear,
Date: 8/9/2023 11:12:00 AM
I see this did quite well for you. Nicely done
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S.Zaynab Kamoonpuri
Date: 8/11/2023 7:31:00 AM
Um it hasn't that many views. I get more reads on other international sites . Thanks for comment,
Date: 7/30/2023 4:27:00 PM
They have purpose mist and monsoons.
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S.Zaynab Kamoonpuri
Date: 8/11/2023 7:30:00 AM
Yep everything has a purpose, thanks for your comment,
Date: 7/28/2023 5:12:00 AM
My friend, this is a superbly crafted poem. Imagery, flow and beauty all tops. Your great talent put to the purpose of writing excellently born poetry! Definite fav for my list. God bless.
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S.Zaynab Kamoonpuri
Date: 8/11/2023 6:21:00 AM
Thanks soo much for that engaging comment fine poet yourself,
Date: 6/18/2023 11:47:00 AM
Another fun read, I haven't enjoyed the rain this much, since I was a kid playing in it; very nicely done.
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S.Zaynab Kamoonpuri
Date: 8/11/2023 6:20:00 AM
Im glad you enjoyed. Warmest thanks for great feedback,
Date: 6/10/2023 5:31:00 PM
I love the energy in this and your appreciation of the rain. Beautiful descriptions, such as "splinters of diamond," "shards of crystal," and "candy floss rainclouds."
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S.Zaynab Kamoonpuri
Date: 8/11/2023 6:19:00 AM
Warmest thanks for the gorgeous comment,
Date: 6/9/2023 12:08:00 PM
Evocative and explosive write Zanab. Nicely done! :)
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S.Zaynab Kamoonpuri
Date: 8/11/2023 6:18:00 AM
Rain bom like they say, yeahh. Warm thanks for comment,
Date: 6/9/2023 11:51:00 AM
Lovely poem with all the sound effects. Nothing like listening to rain when you are cozy and dry inside. Congrats on your POTD win, too. Thanks for pointing me your way. SuZ
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S.Zaynab Kamoonpuri
Date: 8/11/2023 6:17:00 AM
Warmest thanks for beautiful feedback dear,
Date: 6/7/2023 3:36:00 PM
My favorite lines as thunders bellow and thunders roar as rivers swell and rivers soar. Your words lift off the page and perfectly paint wonderful images. Love this!
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S.Zaynab Kamoonpuri
Date: 6/8/2023 8:26:00 AM
I like to read of poet's favourite lines of my poem, warmest thanks for super comment
Date: 6/6/2023 1:29:00 AM
You offer us excellent imagery accompanied by striking onomatopoeia, Zaynab. I always find rain to be inspiring; you have been doubly inspired, I must say! ~ Best regards // paul
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S.Zaynab Kamoonpuri
Date: 6/6/2023 10:07:00 AM
Hello poet Paul, thanks soo much for great comment, nice to know there was onomatopoeia yayy. Cheers n best wishes,
Date: 6/5/2023 7:56:00 AM
Beautiful poem and highly descriptive Just wonderful! Well done~ Warren
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S.Zaynab Kamoonpuri
Date: 6/5/2023 11:07:00 AM
Hii poet Warren so nice to see you again on my poem. Cheers!
Date: 6/5/2023 5:09:00 AM
lovely write - very pleased to see it was POTD
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S.Zaynab Kamoonpuri
Date: 6/5/2023 7:13:00 AM
Thanks soo much for congratz wishes and feedback,
Date: 6/4/2023 3:18:00 AM
Love this. Beautiful. God bless you and Congrats on POTD. Love, Gina
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S.Zaynab Kamoonpuri
Date: 6/5/2023 3:38:00 AM
Warmest thanks for lovely comment and congratz wishes, take care,
Date: 6/3/2023 10:41:00 PM
Hi Zaynab, I’m just coming back to say congratulations on getting the poem of day. Have a great evening:-) Alexis
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S.Zaynab Kamoonpuri
Date: 6/5/2023 3:37:00 AM
Warm thanks for congratz wishes, nice to see u again.
Date: 6/3/2023 6:57:00 PM
Such a brilliant poem and so fun to read, just like dancing in the rain itself! Keep up the excellent writing, my friend :)
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S.Zaynab Kamoonpuri
Date: 6/3/2023 9:53:00 PM
Hii Kelly, long time no see, hreat to see you again on my poem. Warm , warm thanks for that dancing comment, now i feel like waltzing in the rain. :)
Date: 6/3/2023 10:16:00 AM
Hello S.Zaynab, I like the rainy days. I like the drizzle of raindrops. I like to walk in the drizzle. Or when it lightly rains.I like the sound of thunder and lightening. I will not be out in a thunder storm. Hugs. /Darlene\
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 6/5/2023 3:10:00 PM
Hello S.Zaynab, It is safer to watch a thunder storm from the inside. Warmth wishes You are welcome. Hugs./Darlene\
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S.Zaynab Kamoonpuri
Date: 6/3/2023 1:58:00 PM
Yeah me too dont like going out in thunderstorms, just luv watching rain from windows. Warmest thanks for your refreshing comment.
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S.Zaynab Kamoonpuri
Date: 6/3/2023 1:58:00 PM
Hugs and take care dear,
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 6/3/2023 10:21:00 AM
Hello S.Zaynav, Congratulations on the POTD Hugs. /Darlene\
Date: 6/3/2023 9:44:00 AM
Wrapping myself in your rainy day cloud burst… there's something sexy about the rain Atleast it does seem to drive dripping lovers insane. Congratulations on POTD!
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S.Zaynab Kamoonpuri
Date: 6/3/2023 1:54:00 PM
Warmest thanks for visiting with your comment as cheery as cloudburst, and your congratz wishes yayy.
Date: 6/3/2023 7:19:00 AM
I love your playful powerful words and descriptions that evoke smiles and emotions as I read your poem S. zaynab ! Ravishing Rain … a great title . I love the rain and the power and magic it brings. I love opening my mouth and catching rain drops . I love the amazing life it brings to our Mother Earth ! Belated congratulations on your POTD ! Susan :)
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S.Zaynab Kamoonpuri
Date: 6/3/2023 1:53:00 PM
Warmest thanks for your eloquent comment, a great read in itself! Thanx for the congratz.
Date: 6/2/2023 11:21:00 PM
beautiful poem, i enjoyed the images and sonorities, have a good week end
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S.Zaynab Kamoonpuri
Date: 6/3/2023 4:36:00 AM
Warm thanks for the great feedback,
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