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The Raven's Call

In the icy white living mists, in the grayness Rising up around the olden mossy stones I hear them calling through the smudging grey veils That separate this world of unexplainable sadness From the unknowable, from the unknown They say the raven, wisest of the birds, A spirit animal, the shaman’s own, Renewal, divination, and introspection Passes into the eternal, there she finds a second home Finds a glowing light even in this eternal darkness Standing in the inky blackness she fends off the icy fear Oh raven, Raven return from the mists--stay clear, return here Pale woman in black, in human or silken ghostly form In whatever shape you chose, a change of consciousness, To face the cavern's darkness then renewal, to be reborn Amidst this starless somber world, you call a second home Introspection and connection -- Both to the newborn And to the crone. Among the Dead Contest Written by Linda Milgate contest by Rambling Poet

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Date: 2/24/2011 11:52:00 AM
I had only read a couple of the poems and wanted so badly to enter but...too many things were going on and didn't get to. I knew Constance would have a time selecting her winners. There is a long list of winners here. You should be so proud of your winning poem congratulations Linda. Love, Carol
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Date: 2/19/2011 7:12:00 AM
Many congratulations Linda on your fine win in Constance's wonderful contest....:)
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Date: 2/18/2011 6:52:00 PM
Great write here Linda!Congrats on your big win!
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Date: 2/18/2011 6:23:00 AM
Very good poem, Linda, and the last two lines are positively stunning. Congratulations on your win! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 2/18/2011 12:25:00 AM
Sensational story, Linda. Many congrat's on your BIG WIN. Lainie
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Date: 2/17/2011 6:28:00 PM
Congratulations on your win with this fascinating write. Love, Joyce
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Date: 2/17/2011 6:26:00 PM
You did very well here, Linda. Congratulations to you on winning in Constance's contest.
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Date: 2/17/2011 6:07:00 PM
Linda, great job, and congratulations on your honored sixth place win. Agape, Moses
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Date: 2/17/2011 5:33:00 PM
Congratulations on the sixth place win in the contest of Constance, Linda
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Date: 2/17/2011 4:48:00 PM
Congrats Linda on your wonderful win in Among the Dead with this exceptional entry luv.. enjoy another sweet success and victory ...
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Date: 1/18/2011 10:14:00 PM
Good luck with this wonderful entry into the contest. Harry
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Date: 1/16/2011 10:28:00 AM
A truly brilliant interpretation of the photograph, Linda. I like the way you described the "change of consciousness." I did something similar with my interpretation. Awesome use of imagery to describe both the graveyard and the woman. Wishing you success in the contest, dear. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 1/15/2011 2:09:00 PM
Terrific write Linda. Kind of Poe-esque. Love it. Good job. Joe
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Date: 1/15/2011 1:49:00 PM
Hi Linda. thanks for the visit. I have to tell my wife my password as I keep forgetting it, (it's an age thing) The very best of luck with this great write. I'm sure that it will do well. To you, joy and peace, Eamon
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Date: 1/15/2011 1:46:00 PM
VERy well done, linda. Taking it to the supernatual realm. Good luck in the contest.Luv, Andrea
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