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The Raven

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Moon celestial red In Erie fog filled bog Where hundreds of grey bones lying in wait Oozing blood curdling cries Risking fears in the eyes In ones fathers eloping Into the blackness no judgment here Fears are embraced Hell awaits gazing through The fiery cavernous hole The hunched Raven stands Alone atop of deadwood Wings outstretched The Sentinel with eyes wide open Stands gothic form Night of dread has commenced The living dead are sommoned Ravens cawin laughter seals his fate Raven oh Raven where is my daddy I shaunt look for him just want to know where he lies I won't be bringing any flowers Raven,its best be forgotten Hell is no place for mere mortals Only for raven and that forgotten soul

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Anna Hopper

Date: 8/7/2019 10:49:00 AM

Nice!

Tonytocaa Camacho
Date: 8/7/2019 2:14:00 PM

Thank you Anna...hugs tonytocaa

Ann Foster

Date: 8/4/2019 3:41:00 PM

sadly... not to forget a single soul... :) What a great write. Excellent. Ann

Tonytocaa Camacho
Date: 8/7/2019 2:16:00 PM

Thanks a million Ann glad you like peace be you tonytocaa

Anton Smith

Date: 9/12/2015 4:46:00 PM

Dramatic, descriptive, great use of imagery and very well written. Very well done! Would you care to look at Facebook page Gothic: https://www.facebook.com/Raven3.gothic?ref=tn_tnmn Many thanks and keep up the good work. :)

Dorian Petersen Potter

Date: 4/16/2015 4:18:00 AM

Excellent pen Tony! A very deep and profound piece, dear friend.Nice imagery.A 7 from me! Thank you again for visiting my page.Much appreciated.Wishing you a very lovely day!In his light!God bless you!:) D.

Michael Quinn

Date: 4/8/2015 6:52:00 AM

gruesomely descriptive, and so well put... like it a lot

Tonytocaa Camacho
Date: 4/8/2015 7:28:00 AM

Thank you Michael Quinn,it's not about me,it's about people like you that share in the freedom to express without walls and hesitation,really free and without boundaries never expecting anything..thank you again for visiting my world my heart my verse..keep coming back your always welcomed..Tonytocaa

Njeri Hunjeri

Date: 4/4/2015 5:25:00 PM

So dramatic with great imagery. :-)

Tonytocaa Camacho
Date: 4/4/2015 5:33:00 PM

Thank you njeri,for your kind words,and happy Easter to you and yours..tonytocaa

Jan Allison

Date: 4/4/2015 1:33:00 PM

spine chillingly brilliant descriptive write - such vivid imagery Tony! Hugs jan xx 7 xx

Tonytocaa Camacho
Date: 4/4/2015 2:41:00 PM

Thanks I look forward to you commenting,I appreciate it any way it takes time for me to find the right image as you well know,trying to reinvent myself lol. A rose to you ;-))..Tony the one and only lol

Jan Allison
Date: 4/4/2015 2:20:00 PM

Ohh I love the image Tony it wasn't there when I read the poem the first time:-) the images you find are brilliant and i love reading your poems my friend:-) hugs jan xx

Tonytocaa Camacho
Date: 4/4/2015 1:54:00 PM

Thank you jan,always a pleasure to hear from you and your positiveness,your friend ..thanks tony