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The Proposal

Twas the night after Christmas Two Thousand Ten Fulton Street was dazzling, pristine and a glow An evening we'll remember over and over again For it was a night as pure as the glistening snow Christmas music flittered through the air Bringing us peace, joy and sheer delight Our hearts beating to the rhythm of a snare Was that a twinkle I saw, a shimmering light You led me through the many winding trees A forest full of garland, angels and reindeer I felt light and free, as if floating on a breeze With you by my side, I would never know fear We stopped at one magnificent, fragrant fir You pointed to an ornament just within reach A diamond so stunning it sent everything a blur It was your gift to me, taking away my speech My heart danced and soared to heights anew You knelt down and asked me to be your wife Without hesitation I said YES to you Knowing we'll be together into eternal life.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 8/3/2011 8:40:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry making it through round one in the PoetrySoup International Poetry contest Maria. I wish you the best in the final round. Love, Carol
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Date: 7/25/2011 1:30:00 PM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week Maria. Love, Carol
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Date: 12/29/2010 3:52:00 AM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Maria. Wishing you the best in your writing endeavors. You can look to the left side of the main page and find lots of information on PoetrySoup including contests by members of PoetrySoup and contests by the PoetrySoup site also. Wishing you a Happy New Year. Love, Carol
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Date: 12/28/2010 6:48:00 AM
very nice write here
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Date: 12/27/2010 3:02:00 PM
Nice use of rhyme and imagery to share this love story. Welcome to Poetry Soup! I hope you enjoy your time spent here. Best wishes with your writing. Karen
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