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The Pond's Alive

The fulsome figure of the moon O'er floats midst myrrh and cassia's haze Now piercing darkness' call of loon Whilst rumors swirl amidst the maze Yon swan, young goose swift flap their wings The pond's alive, sweet sings the dove As ducklings dance and nature swings A lustrous spectacle above Dark clouds demur, they gather round Fierce crack of lightning bolts below Brew up a storm, a crash resounds The lambent spectacle's cruel foe At rain's hard slants, the pond shrinks back Her light cut short, her brilliance black ~ Iambic Tetrameter ~ February 24, 2021 All Yours (Feb. 26) Poetry Contest Sponsor: Brian Strand

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Date: 2/27/2021 8:37:00 AM
Creative way to go with this winner. Congrats on the work. Sara
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 2/28/2021 6:01:00 PM
Thank you for the kind words, Sara. Have a great week now! :) gw
Date: 2/26/2021 1:06:00 AM
Love the jazziness and the gorgeous imagery! "The pond's alive, sweet sings the dove As ducklings dance and nature swings" This part is exquisite!
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Date: 2/25/2021 11:00:00 AM
Congratulations on your win Gershon. Love the images you have created. They are so dynamic - like the life of the pond. I would say - tongue in cheek - this one is definitely "for the birds!"
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Date: 2/25/2021 9:32:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. "Beautiful" Have a blessed day.....................
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Date: 2/25/2021 9:17:00 AM
Marvelous! A fav for me!
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